Three People Haiku

Proudly as spun gold
The butterfly's wings reveal

Proudly as spun gold,
The butterfly's wings reveal,
Secrets surreal.

Secrets surreal
TV documentary

this is 3 People, so it ends with the last line (3rd line) and it doesn't go into the new one. The next person starts a new line...

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Originally Posted by Haunted

this is 3 People, so it ends with the last line (3rd line) and it doesn't go into the new one. The next people starts a new line...

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OK, I thought that Secrets surreal was the new first line:

Let's go with:

My last burial

secrets surreal
TV documentary
spooky anchorman


my last burial
ended nothing...pain goes on

my last burial
ended nothing...pain goes on
bruised by dread dreams

embers glowing red

embers glowing red
float through the ebony sky

embers glowing red
float through the ebony sky
a purple heart weeps

A timely return

A timely return
Let trumpets sound the event

a timely return
let trumpets sound the event
little air kisses

As the ship then docks,

As the ship then docks,
tears of joy filled the ocean

as the ship then docks,
tears of joy filled the ocean
there's no place like home!

There is no place like home
the red light of the district

There's no place like home
the red light of the district
is too bright for me

Is to bright for me
the whiteness of the full moon

Is too bright for me
the whiteness of the full moon
take a dip in sea!

Skinny dip secret

skinny dip secret
precarious in riptides

skinny dip secret
precarious in riptides
better dive deeper!

brazen little tart

did you mean tart or dart? LOL

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Originally Posted by Lynne50

did you mean tart or dart? LOL

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I changed it; I meant tart....:lol:

brazen little tart
angel face but don't be fooled

brazen little tart
angel face but don't be fooled
a devil inside

a devil inside
replaced the whole of my heart

a devil inside
replaced the whole of my heart
with an icy stone

oooohhh, i liked your ending Haunted

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Originally Posted by dara.cv

oooohhh, i liked your ending Haunted

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thanks dara. You gave me a good line to work with :)

with an icy stone
i make my threat to release

with an icy stone
i make my threat to release
heat of the moment

Moonlight on roses

Moonlight on roses
falls like an emollient

Moonlight on roses
falls like an emollient
on a soft pink blush

Five syllables here,

Five syllables here,
seven in the second line

Five syllables here,
seven in the second line
another five here