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Mom and Dad, please HELP!
my bad spending has caught up
I need good advice

Note for Pen: Bravo on the tribute to O.Henry, I enjoyed it immensely and applaud your talents! :)

I need good advice
on how to become a free-
loader forever

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loader forever—
my mom always said I’d be—
never be anything—

never be anything—
but take a look at me now—
finally found home…

finally found home—
a place where I can belong—
writing to the world…

Writing to the World
about my Happy Birthday
Today is AWESOME!

"Carpe Diem!"

Have a great Day, Everyone!

Sincerely,

Uncle Lar

Today is awesome
But beware my dearest friends
Tomorrow comes too

Tomorrow comes too
with the good things and bad ones;
learn, adapt, and win!

:thumbs_up

Learn, adapt, and win!
The key to success is this
You will never fail

You will never fail
if you honestly accept
yourself as you are.

:thumbs_up

Yourself as you are
In the soul's innermost depths
Only found when lost

Only found when lost
was the wayward one, after
a moment of bliss.

a moment of bliss
lasts a millisecond, though
I do not love you

Quote:

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Originally Posted by ktd222

a moment of bliss
lasts a millisecond, though
I do not love you

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(I'm starting on this new style that is written in a sort of biological concept so it might not be entirely clear. I hope some of you like it.)

Though I do not love you
and widened pavement is ice,
slipping the shiftless

walkway, ground and foot,
the many knive's intrusions,

red, white and platelets
ooze the acute incision,
and rise dark-felt dreams

where the path, the wake,
the calling newly muted,
wrath's voices haulted

Wrath's voices halted
a flickering ember frail
and silenced the meek

I liked your new style above, Adol well done :)

And I would like to warmly wish Uncle Lar a belated birthday greeting, hope your day was ticketty-boo, as they say here. :)

and silenced the meek
Mr. M, for his deeds as
this nation's father

this nation's father
and an abandoned motherland
naked dysfunction