leaving - but a self,
a self without eyes or ears,
dark to all that's "self".
Hi ktd - I hope you don't mind, I expanded on your thoughts.
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leaving - but a self,
a self without eyes or ears,
dark to all that's "self".
Hi ktd - I hope you don't mind, I expanded on your thoughts.
not at all - it's quite wonderful
dark to all that's "self" -
an inward movement that is
like dying, once, twice
Liked that last Haiku, Ktd...
like dying, once, twice
and burning down to ashes;
rise phoenix's newbirth.
Yes, we could colaborate and write a long poem about "self"
rise phoenix's newbirth—
from ashes of the old comes new—
in a burst of flame…
in a burst of flame
twilight blinks instantly day
scarring my vision
scarring my vision
with absurd, perfect Beauty
low, how very low.
low, how very low
the soul goes when Love breaks the
heart in smithereens
heart in smithereens—
you must handle very gently
a heart made of glass…
a heart made of glass
burning flame in cage of air
ten thousand beats near
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(has anyone noticed we're closer to 10,000 than the 10,000 thread?)
Ten thousand beats near
eager anticipation
comes my heart with hope.
ten thousand beats near—
native drums do the talking—
trespass not—taboo…
Trespass not—Taboo;
many Rules are made to be
broken and rethought.
:thumbs_up
broken and rethought,
I bought the farm for pennies
and no interest
...and no interest??
My bank account is defunct
ATM on fritz
ATM on fritz,
I must avoid Credit Cards,
Mom and Dad, please HELP!