We really like that line 'dazzling crystal drops'! hahaha...now we have two completed haiku's with my brilliant line...haha..I liked the last finished haiku a lot; very pretty!
new line:
poetic moment
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We really like that line 'dazzling crystal drops'! hahaha...now we have two completed haiku's with my brilliant line...haha..I liked the last finished haiku a lot; very pretty!
new line:
poetic moment
poetic moment
fateful time for soul-searching
poetic moment
fateful time for soul-searching
a chance to find self.
stress the boundary
stress the boundary
the taunt line of sanity
stress the boundary
the taut line of sanity
have had enough fun.
surreal amusements
surreal amusements
splendid etheral pursuits
:lol: Loved it! :thumbs_upQuote:
Originally Posted by Haunted
Surreal amusements
splendid etheral pursuits
who lights cigarettes ...
;) [couldn't resist...]
I will smoke to it!
I will smoke to it!
this fatal vice is charming
I will smoke to it!
this fatal vice is charming
just do not inhale
just do not inhale
London's vicious vapours when
just do not inhale
London's vicious vapours when
Jack met me below
Sparrows in the cage
Sparrows in the cage
Singing of the latest love
Sparrows in the cage
Singing of the latest love
a flighty affair
a flighty affair
a frivolous fancy...stop!
a flighty affair
a frivolous fancy...stop!
but I cannot stop...
home is where you are
home is where you are
put those feet up and relax
home is where you are
put those feet up and relax
here on the sofa
soon safe and secure
soon safe and secure
but now still in the trenches
soon safe and secure
but now still in the trenches
strange state of limbo
emancipation
emancipation
of our self-enslav'ed minds
Emancipation
of our self-enslav'ed minds
Confusion ensues
emancipation
of our self-enslav'ed minds
run free on the edge
OOOPS! Too late, so I'll start another...
the envelope pushed
the envelope pushed
tension now evades the air
the envelope pushed
tension now evades the air
difficult to breathe
standing motionless
standing motionless
waiting for door to open
standing motionless
waiting for door to open
blue vistas beyond
I like the last line. Good!Quote:
Originally Posted by Janine
" In search of my roots"
Thanks, Maz!
in search of my roots
beyond parchment scrolls of past
In search of my roots
beyond parchment scrolls of past
shades of sepia
pen in hand, ink smears
Pen in hand, ink smears
Rorschach reveals the secrets
Pen in hand, ink smears
Rorschach reveals the secrets
words in gravity