What was it before?
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What was it before?
"Men can do nothing without the make-believe of a beginning."Quote:
Originally Posted by Monica
George Eliot, Daniel Deronda
I feel sick and straight afterc work Im going shopping :sick:
Oh the horror! my carefully saved money is going to dissapear down the endless drains of Borders, I just know it!
:lol:
*Feel better*
....show choir.....
Thinking wastes brain cells! :lol: :lol: :lol:
Akito is a girl! :eek: :lol:....
I'm lovin' on my new poker chips, they so purdy.
New Avy!!!
Does thinking alter reality?
Pen, I don't think so....:confused:
Perhaps word order does, eh? :nod: :nod:
ALONE ON BALD MOUNTAIN
Fog rises, shadows deepen.
Somewhere, wolf howls.
Pulse quickens as branches crackle.
Slinking shadow passes.
Startled, heart races.
Loneliness and fear descend.
Wolf howls closer.
Eyes dart everywhere—
Nothing! Fog and dark…
Dark and fog—nothing!
Everywhere dart eyes.
Closer howls wolf.
Descend fear and loneliness,
races heart, startled.
Passes shadow, slinking.
Crackle branches as quickens pulse.
Howls wolf—somewhere!
Deepen shadows, rises fog…
Pendragon (as Jonathan Blade)
Nice poem, Pendragon, perhaps the most unique and interesting I have ever read. I applaud to you.Quote:
Originally Posted by Pendragon
Thanks, D-Man! I had several of these published, including this one in The Poet's Attic Quarterly. (I own all copyrights). As far as I know, this nine line, nine line exact reverse is my own invention. Ideally, you should get two points of view by reversing the words. I'd love to have others write some, and let me see others viewpoints using the form. Any poets that want to take a shot have my blessings! :D
It snowed, it snowed, it snowed! YAY! *sings and jumps around happily*
:banana: same here Themis :banana:Quote:
Originally Posted by Themis
...if only I could fully enjoy it....