Immersed in silence,
The night glow is luminous;
Alone, I see the stars.
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Immersed in silence,
The night glow is luminous;
Alone, I see the stars.
Alone I see the stars
Beneath Mark Antony's soul.
Drink wine and love women.
:D
Immersed in silence
I feel emptiness within
engulfed forever
engulfed forever
but you better get loud quick
because we all are
(ejarg, hope you have a great time on the forums; you're supposed to continue from the last line of the post above and mantain the syllable(I suck at spelling?) rule.)
Because we all are,
We all can become as not;
Death tolls the last bell.
Death tolls the last bell -
the saved ran away from the
solomn overcast
Oops! My bad ... I was at the wrong page, and I saw Bebbin's post as the last one ...Quote:
Originally Posted by Adolescent09
Quote:
Originally Posted by Bebbin
I will try to fix with some of your lines; start with Virgil's last line -
Drink wine and love women.
I feel emptiness within,
engulfed forever.
Last two line are by Ejarg, Hey, E, you did not know you felt that way about women, did you?:lol:
Now the rest of the Haiku's work anyway. I will use the very first line in my new Haiku.
Adol, no problem - I fixed it to keep flowing along after yours.Quote:
Originally Posted by Adolescent09
Because we all are,
We all can become as not;
Death tolls the last bell.
ktd, here is the next in line - sorry I had to move you to have it all fall in place.Quote:
Originally Posted by ktd222
Solomn overcast
Clouds with stale vaporous fumes,
Poison existence.
poison existence
subvert the heart of being
her room is empty
Her room is empty
Anguish, loneliness, sorrow
Like a lover lost
Like a lover lost
Solitude is all she feels
Her heart is empty
Janine, thanks for making it right again. Sorry guys for the confusion ... my bad :(