Almost. Close to it.
but i cant quite reach the top
am i doomed to fail?
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Almost. Close to it.
but i cant quite reach the top
am i doomed to fail?
am i doomed to fail?
why is this hook in my mouth?
remove it, dammit!
remove it, dammit!
one by one and step by step
put the shoes away
put the shoes away
we'll go no more a-roving
plagiarism's fun
plagarism's fun
but i am so fond of my
own ideas too
that last sentence has only 4 syllables?
own i de as too - 5
I don't get it. "my" is on the second line, though
omg, as if we are going to be this argumentative over one frigging syllable:
own i de as too
own ideas too
yiddish to the rescue once
again: ay guvalt!
that's phonetically spelled, btw. don't give me **** about it alright.
*no one mentioned that that's a really sucky line to try to build on :p
own ideas too
and you shall render useless
destructive weapons
for such a sucky line, you guys managed quite nicely, twice.
i think this thread seems to be fairly critical today. i am going to the garden to eat worms.
no more poetry for you!
*oops!
Again: ay guvalt!
Holy moley! Sacre bleu!
...and other outbursts
It's what we do. :D
oh.... I got it NOW!
In the meantime, I will refrain from writing the next poem...