Sailing to Eden
destroying humanity
the pirates succeeds.
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alright. that was bad anyway, hihi.
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Sailing to Eden
destroying humanity
the pirates succeeds.
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alright. that was bad anyway, hihi.
:lol: That was hilarious...just because of the combination of Eden, and humanity, and pirates...at least I hoped you meant it to be funny.:blush:Quote:
Originally Posted by Reccura
I'm the worst poet there is!Quote:
Originally Posted by ktd222
Well, at least it made someone laugh, hahark. You're right: Eden, pirates, humanity... it doesn't mix.
No! It was a great haiku! Too many haikus expressing sad thoughts...your haiku was a delightful twistQuote:
Originally Posted by Reccura
Aw, thank you, ktd!Quote:
Originally Posted by ktd222
heres another one that might made you laugh then,
The pirates succeeds
they chased rainbows with guitars
their breaths smellled seaweeds.
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Are you encouraging me to make "haha" worthy haikus?
Their breaths smellled seaweeds,
They cometh from the water,
Death through'out the air' ,
Death throughout the air,
Silent lands and snow-capped hearts
Nothing more can grow
Nothing more can grow
The tumour is now removed
Happy tears, leaves fall
Happy tears, leaves fall,
Down the trail lies my waterfall—
I call “Rivendell”…
I call "Rivendell"
Came upon Elrond the elf
Who remade the sword
Who remade the sword
The remaker of the words
Plays with fire, recasts
Plays with fire, recasts
Roles, after company hurt
In the inferno
in the inferno
at least was virgil to guide
here virtually none
:D gee, thanks! :pQuote:
Originally Posted by ktd222
you could have kept your haiku going, but thanks for using mine, because i really liked the name of your yacht! ;)
here virtually none
souls there in for the harvest
elsewhere one should go