The ABC Poem Tree

Blue
Curtains
Defy air
Even as wind blows
Fleeting wisps of dreams
Grow and fall before you

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Originally Posted by symphony

I dont know if i understand the form yet? Are we to add a syllable more to each line as we go, along with going with the consequent letters? So the next line should start with F and have 6 syllables?

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Yes, but some don't always follow the rules...;)

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Originally Posted by BienvenuJDC

Yes, but some don't always follow the rules...;)

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and who might that be...

:D
I'm not saying another word...

Blue
Curtains
Defy air
Even as wind blows
Fleeting wisps of dreams
Grow and fall before you
Hallowed billows of dreams waft

Blue
Curtains
Defy air
Even as wind blows
Fleeting wisps of dreams
Grow and fall before you
Hallowed billows of dreams waft
In little concentric circles at your feet

Blue
Curtains
Defy air
Even as wind blows
Fleeting wisps of dreams
Grow and fall before you
Hallowed billows of thought waft
In little concentric circles at your feet
Just as confusion deafens the sky

Blue
Curtains
Defy air
Even as wind blows
Fleeting wisps of dreams
Grow and fall before you
Hallowed billows of thought waft
In little concentric circles at your feet
Just as confusion deafens the sky
kelp like clouds swirl through the maze of thought
L

Blue
Curtains
Defy air
Even as wind blows
Fleeting wisps of dreams
Grow and fall before you
Hallowed billows of thought waft
In little concentric circles at your feet
Just as confusion deafens the sky
Kelp like clouds swirl through the maze of thought
Little fishes swim through the breeze of the mind
M

Blue
Curtains
Defy air
Even as wind blows
Fleeting wisps of dreams
Grow and fall before you
Hallowed billows of thought waft
In little concentric circles at your feet
Just as confusion deafens the sky
Kelp like clouds swirl through the maze of thought
Little fishes swim through the breeze of the mind
More winds, more waves, in my sea, in the blue curtains.

new
opaque

New
Opaque
Purposeful

Just currious why do you always start a new one when you get to the letter m?

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Originally Posted by Dark Muse

Just currious why do you always start a new one when you get to the letter m?

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I never noticed....maybe coincidence?

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Originally Posted by Dark Muse

Just currious why do you always start a new one when you get to the letter m?

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I did it because the last one seems to have completed itself — starting and ending with curtains. But the real reason is I'm just too fried to come up with another long line :D