beyond earth's bound'ry
white film of hesitancy
can we make the leap?
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beyond earth's bound'ry
white film of hesitancy
can we make the leap?
Look before you leap
Look before you leap
into the land of unknown
Look before you leap
into the land of unknown
passion's depths consume
passion paves my plight
passion paves my plight
prisoner of fate's cruel hand
passion paves my plight
prisoner of fate's cruel hand
lone star of the night.
Nice last line, maz...
bright night lost in fog
thanks, Jan.
bright night lost in fog
blinded vision with the smog
bright night lost in fog
blinded vision with the smog
touch finds path to light
touch finds path to light
come closer, sit beside me
feel blaze of my heart.
Nice one, maz, but his is three person......beware of the haiku police.....
hearts on fire dancing
Gosh! i don't seem to wait!
Come on 'third person'....sometimes waiting is hell!
hearts on fire dancing
like moths circ-ling around lamp
That's ok, the H police haven't stopped us yet; we can morph into the third person; no one else seems to be around. I will be gone soon myself for awhile.Quote:
Originally Posted by mazHur
hearts on fire dancing
like moths circ-ling around lamp
temptation's bright flame
Have you heard the song, If you go away/On a summer day ??Quote:
Originally Posted by Janine
If you will leave there will be 2 persons short and me alone ,,, How will a sparrow make spring!;)
sorry, try again
one sparrow makes spring
a sparrow makes spring
two sparrows bring hail and rain
a sparrow makes spring
dance in perfect unison
a sparrow makes springQuote:
Originally Posted by mazHur
two sparrows bring hail and rain
three sparrows turmoil
maz, can you finish mine? You are so good at this.
a sparrow makes springQuote:
Originally Posted by Janine
dance in perfect unison
singing to love's tune.;)
Very nice - thanks!
peacock's feather eyes
peacock's feather eyes
dollar coins spread all over
peacock's feather eyes
dollar coins spread all over
are they heads or tails?
I know that song well and I think I know the next lines..."then you might as well take the sun away, all the birds that flew in the summer sky, when our love was new and our hearts were high" - wow, surprised I remembered that.:) Been a long time since I heard it...good song!Quote:
Originally Posted by mazHur
hahaha...isn't that they other Haiku theme? I have to go and eat dinner. It must be late there.Quote:
If you will leave there will be 2 persons short and me alone ,,, How will a sparrow make spring!;)
Ok, to present haiku.....
peacock's feather eyes
dollar coins spread all over
shimm'ring shadows glow
oops, sorry mercedes, I was 3 sec's too late. Anyway, I love yours best!Quote:
Originally Posted by just mercedes
I will use my last line as my first now.
Shimm'ry shadows glow
Shimm'ry shadows glow
winter moon breaks through grey cloud
Shimm'ry shadows glow
winter moon breaks through grey cloud
surrounded by stars
nice shift of focus!
nice shift of focus!
mind has left heart has entered
nice shift of focus!
mind has left heart has entered
within find heaven
Build a paradise
build a paradise
east of Garden of Eden
build a paradise
east of Garden of Eden
unhinged from sorrow
Go away ill wind
go away ill wind
blow across a dusty sky
go away ill wind
blow across a dusty sky
paint it blue again
stars flaring at night
stars flaring at night
lanterns glow on tranquil pond
stars flaring at night
lanterns glow on tranquil pond
moon glares at water