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Shutters in the night
Hide when the moon is out there
I rest beside you

I rest beside you
in wavy summer grass, mouths
full of blueberries.

Full of blueberries,
Steaming pie crust ozzed out blue
Juice, sweet aroma.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Pendragon

Boundless sorrow weeps—
At the tomb of His dead friend—
“Lazarus, come forth!”

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That was brilliant, Uncle Pen! I had to actually count the syllables because it seemed impossible to put a dialogue in a haiku.

Juicy sweet aroma
The bees and flies surround it.
Shoo! Fools, go away!

Beautiful Janine! Hello!

juice, sweet aroma
of appricots and spices,
soon fills the glass with longing.

whoops, I was too slow - thought no one was out there this late . Hello beautiful - yourself, Lainy!

Haven't seen you lately to talk to.

Shoo! Fools, go away!
Women, we're the fools, 'cause we
Longing fills the cup.

well, Lain, I tried to fix it!

It's nice, don't worry about it. It's 3:15 P.M. here now. (Although I worry about your last line...)

hi guys. :wave:

Longing fills the glass
with moonlit drops of honey
and bitter lemon.

and bitter lemon
made bitter hearts - This is
the days of our lives.

That was nice, Riesa..

The days of our lives
Combat the war of the worlds
Deep within our hearts

So sorry, Lain, you are right - boy did I mess that one up big time. Forgive me, girls. Riesa, you did a good job fixing my last line, thanks. Can I change mine now? I will take it from your last line, Lain. It is 2:41 AM here:yawnb:

Deep within our hearts
Lies the core of our true souls
Hide from it we can't.

The overused :" To err is human. Perfect is boring." It's okay Janine! ;)

Hide from it we can't
The tears,longing in my eyes
Tutti mi manchi (I miss you all)

Thanks, just tired and can never seem to fix them right when I post too slow.
Someone else has to take this one. I don't know what that means. Going to bed anyway...can't think now.....nite:wave:

Goodnight Janine! The last line means "I miss you all" in Italiano. ;) I have to bail out now too. Zia Zeny is waiting for me... ;) Someone else will take over...