Of sun and rain joined,
The buttercups in the field;
Dew drops in their hearts.
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Of sun and rain joined,
The buttercups in the field;
Dew drops in their hearts.
dew drops in their hearts
faces lifted to the sun...
buttercups enchant
Buttercups enchant,
Bees that buzz nearby the stream,
Flowing water sings.
Buttercups enchant
But dandeilion allure
Is slower growing.
Is slower growing
Young minds teach and talk a lot
They see rays of light
They see rays of light,
They stretch out tender tendrils,
Plants worship the Sun…
Plants worship the sun
Offering perfumed incense
'Til death bows them home.
'Til death bows them home,
all souls ascend, destiny,
He sees and judges
Nice Haiku, Adol,
He sees and judges;
All about him submit to -
Infinite wisdom.
Thanks
infitinite wisdom,
insurmountable courage,
his maxims obeyed,
You might want to revise - you spelled infinite wrong - I am a poor speller too but it looks like a typo. Nice Haiku though; I like it.
His maxims obeyed,
They bow to his majesty;
Henry Fifth does rule.
Thanks for correcting me. Yes, it was a typo lol. (It's very challenging to write a good verse with a select number of syllables per line. That's why I like this.)
Henry fifth does rule,
a conquest beset within
a resistless fort
Glad your are back on the thread. Personally, I got addicted once I got the hang of it. At first I was all thumbs and did not do the syllable count correctly. Now it seems to come naturally. This thread is totally fun, and a good learning/thinking exercise.
A resistless fort -
Henry swells with noble plans,
Against all odds.
Sorry, big Henry V fan - love the film!
against all odds
set right yet undone again
tranquility gone,
Tranquility gone,
Confusion ceased fate's hand; King's
Son a garden lost.
Still thinking on Henry V and his son Henry VI
Nice poem below your Haiku - did you write it? You are a "romantic", Adolescent09.