Adolescent09,
the haiku has to be in a 5-7-5 syllable format
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Adolescent09,
the haiku has to be in a 5-7-5 syllable format
and improvises
wonders, unknown to us -the
ones who sense with sense
ones who sense with sense
of our true being and selves
find reward in truth.
find reward in truth
distorts the very fabric
of reality - Arghhh!
of reality - Arghhh!
simple syllable count
changed not by the words
changed not by the words
the onomatopoeias
oof!, arghh, grrr! and ow!
hee hee
hee hee, yourself!
oof!, arghh, grrr! and ow!
The dogs will bark and the cats
Will run far away!
Will run far away
to exotic lands sweet with
seductive pursuits.
Seductive pursuits;
Exotic flesh ignites life
Sweet delicate spice.
Sweet delicate spice;
Life is full of pleasures, pain
Worth all we suffer.
Worth all we suffer -
Only if the sufferings
are actual pleasures
are actual pleasures,
not to be compromised
by ulterior whims
by ulterior whims,
or ulterior motives, or
ulterior design
ulterior design
culminates in avarice
dwindling hopes
dwindling hopes catch on
a whispered secret and blossom
daintily as Spring
daintily as spring
when His mighty finger
smudges white on blue