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06-05-2009, 09:59 PM
Janine

Good Augury for future
the Fifth one is on her way
together, create
06-05-2009, 10:02 PM
Janine

sorry I missed this line before:

Where are all my friends?
Here lurking in the background
06-05-2009, 10:02 PM
mazHur

Quote:

Originally Posted by Janine

would this work....?

kiz_paws the creator
sensitive nature's author
creating myst'ries

this seems perfect! aloha!
06-05-2009, 10:05 PM
Janine

Quote:

Originally Posted by mazHur

this seems perfect! aloha!

Thanks; glad you are not mad at me for altering your line some...Aloha? :lol:
06-05-2009, 10:09 PM
mazHur

Quote:

Originally Posted by Janine

Thanks; glad you are not mad at me for altering your line some...Aloha? :lol:

As I told you before, I love women doing such innocent things!!;)
06-05-2009, 10:11 PM
BienvenuJDC

Bravi...Bravi...Bravissimi
06-05-2009, 10:15 PM
Janine

:lol: who says I'm innocent? ;)

this one needs completing.....

Where are all my friends?
Here lurking in the background
06-05-2009, 10:17 PM
mazHur

Quote:

Originally Posted by Janine

:lol: who says I'm innocent?

this one needs completing.....

your heart and mind tells:p

Where are all my friends?
Here lurking in the background
making me haunted.:)
06-05-2009, 10:20 PM
mazHur

Bravi...Bravi...Bravissimi
Bravo Bravus Bravicum
06-05-2009, 10:21 PM
Janine

Quote:

Originally Posted by mazHur

your heart and mind tells:p

Where are all my friends?
Here lurking in the background
making me haunted.:)

Bravo, maz!

...and I really give myself away, eh?

Here's a first line

haunted, alluring....
06-05-2009, 10:23 PM
Janine

Quote:

Originally Posted by mazHur

Bravi...Bravi...Bravissimi
Bravo Bravus Bravicum

Isn't that first line more than 5 syllables? I am confused and I don't know Italian...obviously....
06-05-2009, 10:23 PM
mazHur

haunted, alluring....
on her way to conquer hearts
06-05-2009, 10:26 PM
mazHur

Quote:

Originally Posted by Janine

Isn't that first line more than 5 syllables? I am confused and I don't know Italian...obviously....

Yes it is( infact 8 syllabled)but I though it is pronounced in short form by Bien, I hope he is not half asleep??;)
06-05-2009, 10:31 PM
Janine

Quote:

Originally Posted by mazHur

Yes it is( infact 8 syllabled)but I though it is pronounced in short form by Bien, I hope he is not half asleep??;)

I thought so....I am the one who is half asleep right now...:yawnb:
06-05-2009, 10:35 PM
mazHur

okay, then lets hit the sack and prepare to dream!llol
06-05-2009, 10:37 PM
Haunted

haunted, alluring....
on her way to conquer hearts
mmmmm, Bravissimi!!!

(whatever that means! :lol:
06-05-2009, 10:37 PM
Janine

Quote:

Originally Posted by mazHur

okay, then lets hit the sack and prepare to dream!llol

Must be super late there.....I am dreaming via movieland in a few minutes and then I will "shuffle off this mortal coil" to dreamland and sleep...."sleep that knits up the raveled sleeve of care"...Shakespeare...Hamlet and McBeth......;) Peaceful dreams, my friend.....
06-05-2009, 10:39 PM
BienvenuJDC

"Bravi...Bravi...Bravissimi!" sang Erik in response to Daae's performance...

Therefore, I was giving the ultimate praise for a job well done!
06-05-2009, 10:39 PM
mazHur

Quote:

Originally Posted by Janine

Must be super late there.....I am dreaming via movieland in a few minutes and then I will "shuffle off this mortal coil" to dreamland and sleep...."sleep that knits up the raveled sleeve of care"...Shakespeare...Hamlet and McBeth......;) Peaceful dreams, my friend.....

G'night
sleep tight!!:)
06-08-2009, 03:55 PM
alakungfu

the legend derailed
06-08-2009, 03:58 PM
mazHur

the legend derailed
its bogeys turned upside down
06-08-2009, 04:34 PM
Haunted

the legend derailed
its bogeys turned upside down
spilling its magic
06-08-2009, 07:39 PM
alakungfu

by-product of vice
06-08-2009, 07:42 PM
mazHur

by-product of vice
the precursor of swine flu
06-08-2009, 07:50 PM
alakungfu

by-product of vice
the precursor of swine flu
and harbinger vile
06-08-2009, 08:16 PM
mazHur

one two three four five
06-08-2009, 10:07 PM
Haunted

one two three four five
six seven eight step step kick step
06-09-2009, 12:40 AM
Janine

one two three four five
six seven eight step step kick step
let's do the can-can!
06-09-2009, 01:55 AM
mazHur

she slept like a thrush
06-09-2009, 01:58 AM
Haunted

she slept like a thrush
all snug in her little nest
06-09-2009, 02:03 AM
mazHur

she slept like a thrush
all snug in her little nest
nestlings under wings
06-09-2009, 05:20 PM
alexar

bright sun on white stones
06-09-2009, 05:34 PM
just mercedes

bright sun on white stones
under black Cold Mountain pines
06-09-2009, 05:44 PM
Buh4Bee

bright sun on white stones
under black Cold Mountain pines
I stand and wonder
06-09-2009, 05:45 PM
alexar

Quote:

Originally Posted by jersea

bright sun on white stones
under black Cold Mountain pines
I stand and wonder

Hey that one came out well, high fives.
06-09-2009, 05:53 PM
Buh4Bee

five fingers, one up
06-09-2009, 05:57 PM
just mercedes

unequivocal signal
06-09-2009, 06:02 PM
alexar

five fingers, one up
unequivocal signal
and symbol of self
06-09-2009, 06:10 PM
Buh4Bee

a mean girl said sorry
06-09-2009, 06:26 PM
just mercedes

a mean girl said sorry
but her fingers were still crossed

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