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Finally set free
A sudden hatching of moths
Flutter from your mouth

Flutter from your mouth
Wings brush my cheek as they pass
Leave a trail of dust

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The last line I counted 6 not 5, but I've been wrong many times.

A trail of dust
Wheels turn unchecked on rock
Wind carries the sound

Yes, wrong, Daileen. Also, your second line was only six syllables. But what the hey.

Wind carries the sound
Of seagulls fighting for cheese
From your old sandwich

Tee Hee, told you I was wrong often. I am nothing if
not true to my word :) ---I'll try again.

From your old sandwich
Crawl the beasts of renewal
Munching sounds commence

Munching sound commence
Ah! What a wonderful sound
Says the old termite

says the old termite
to the young beware firey death
what once will never again

Will never again
Dance in the shining leaves buff
Skin bubbles with itch

Skin bubble with itch
A gallon of calamine
Will not be enough

Will not be enough
Will never be sufficient
Will therefore not stop

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Originally Posted by Dailen

Tee Hee, told you I was wrong often.

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Well...I spelled your name wrong.

Will therefore not stop
Let all those who see this beware
For eternity

For eternity
The sun will consume itself
Long Live the light

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how could i forget the last line is 5???

Long live the light
Let it shine, but remember
Don't step into it

Don't step into it
Sticks like slime of the snail
Send that dog away

Send that dog away
He has a sad, stupid look
He puts off clients

He puts off the client
Like a bad advertisement
Annoying salesman

Annoying salesman
Brings with him a voice of doom
Beautiful trinkets

Beautiful trinkets
You can keep your jewelry
Give me cold, hard cash

Give me cold, hard cash
Otherwise you might just die
...Or become a fly

Or become a fly
On the wall observing all
until you are swatted

Until you are swatted
Your life is peaceful and calm
But you're all flat

but you're all flat
boring tasteless hopeless like
Pan cakes without sugar

Cakes without sugar
Eaten by the young children
They are not amused

they are not amuse
is she still around here now
hard to fill those shoes

Hard to fill those shoes
Even harder to let go
Cut the apron strings

Cut the apron strings
your son is a mid-life'er
nose hairs need trimming

Nose hairs need trimming
Fingernails need repainting
And so does the house

And so does the house
White fence, door, bedroom, and more
Perfect for a doll.

Perfect for a doll
But not for a human being
The mice agree too

The mice agree to,
Cheese crumbs soak up dirty floors
Stomach's are empty.

Stomachs are empty
Might you possibly have food
I'm very hungry

im very hungry
let love nurture my needs
and quench my thirsts

and quench my thirsts
satiated smiling soul
ruler of my dreams

Ruler of my dreams
I fall into your light glow
Kissing starry eyes.

kissing starry eyes
is there any greater joy
in the mortal realm

In the mortal realm
trapped by longing and the past
Confused is the heart

Confused is the heart
I'm confused in my head too
Might as well sleep now

might as well sleep now
rest is theraputic for
my aching brain cell

My aching brain cell
String theory erupt the rest
occupation bad