New Poetry Game-Cinquain Chain- Come on, it's easy and fun!

freaky
things boggle mind
in the darkness of night
no one near to hold you and kiss
you tight

you tight
and cuddling close;
shutting my eyes tighter
to not to look through the dark.Oh!
teddy!

teddy
things are easy
to manage and handle
carry them in lap and fondle
and kiss

and kiss
the fire of night
smouldering shadows slink
crossing graveyards, crossroads, gallows--
Reaper...


And mazHur, if you are not going to follow the rules as stated on page one of this thread, please start your own thread...

reaper
solitary
reaper moves in the field
harvesting moon and twinkling stars
of love

of love
where did it go
beyond the sky and stars
to another place just near here
to you

to you
i dedicate
all the love that exists
in the deeper world of my heart
kiss me

kiss me
with tenderness
just there behind my ear
where hides the tomorrows to come
revealed

Quote:

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Originally Posted by littlewing53

kiss me
with tenderness
just there behind my ear
where hides the tomorrows to come
revealed

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revealed
behind your ears
is a budding G-spot
which needs a hot very hot kiss
to bloom

to bloom
you must plant first
something that is worthwhile
and if it is, you won't have to
go deep

go deep
into the sea
swim with all the fishes
and go jump with all the dolphins
let's go

lets go
skinnydipping
into the full moon lake;
it's clear to the bottom, the moon
lives there

the moon lives there
hiding its face
from the burning sun's eye
and waits for the evening to come
to shine

Quote:

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Originally Posted by mazHur

the moon lives there
hiding its face
from the burning sun's eye
and waits for the evening to come
to shine

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mazHur, the structure of the cinquain is:

2 syllables
4 syllables
6 syllables
8 syllables
2 syllables

You must begin yours with only the last line of the previous cinquain.

oh, sorry ,,,all got mixed up !


to shine
like a moon bright
on a dark summer night
borrow some gold of love from me
and smile

and smile
is what I did
a fist of white gravel
swimming to the surface, a gift
for you

for you
is everything
my heart, my soul, my mind
if you want to have more you can
my life

my life
tumbles away.
Each grainy moment slips
through thin glass, I'm powerless to
stop it

stop it
I am coming
with new grains of moments
to refill your thin glass of time
with life

"stop it",
with teary eyes
she begged, in giggling fits.
i stopped, and saw her tears turned real
at once

....

Edit:

with life
and everything
it offered, i lived, but
in death, forgot to leave a piece
of life...

at once
I fell in love
at once I got to know
the meaning of love at first sight
at once

of life
I think no more
for my love is my life
If I lose my love I will cease
to live

to live
a normal life
what would I give away?
everything, every wish--
my all...

my all
that's all I have
all that is left of me
a heart turned into ashes gray
white dust

white dust
under rippling
water holds another
world of its own, with colourful
beings...

Quote:

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Originally Posted by symphony

white dust
under rippling
water holds another
world of its own, with colourful
beings...

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beings.....
in lands remote
may be separated
but they live in each others heart
in love

in love
for evermore
my heart does follow yours
not even death can separate
our love

our love
is for love's sake
like the golden moon rays
like the silvery shine of sun
sublime

sublime
or sub-lemon
it's all the same to me
just the thought makes me pucker up
kiss me

kiss me
you know you want
the fullness of my soul
the true expressed love of my heart
tonight

Quote:

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Originally Posted by ampoule

sublime
or sub-lemon
it's all the same to me
just the thought makes me pucker up
kiss me

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^^^ love this ampoule (sub-lemon!)

I couldn't help but post this :

tonight
I'm gonna have
myself a real good time
I feel alive-ive-ive-ive, and
the world....

God bless Freddie Mercury!

But on a serious note:

tonight
let the wild dogs
run unfettered on the
streets, the night belongs to them not
to us

kiss me
or whatever
give my heart that warm feel
that melts it like a chocolate
in hands

tonight
full moon will glide
through the windows of my
heart's pavilion and brighten
my life

my life -
have I done this
cinquain before? C'mon,
choo-choo, switch tracks, rock n' roll my
caboose

caboose
will surely change
track and choo-choo for you
so that you can keep on writing
cinquains

Cinquains...
easy, i will
tell you the recipe. Take
raw thoughts in a syllabled bowl,
and serve ;)

and serve
on a platter
with sweet and sour sauce
embellish it with some salad
Phoochka !

Phoochka!
puffy, crunchy
fill them up with good things
then fill me up to curb this
hunger

hunger
respects no law
it cannot wait to eat
delicious Phoochkas with chutney
of love!

lol mazhur u got the spelling right. finally! :lol:


of love
sprained to hatred
and hatred burned to wrath
till wrath made me bleed, so that i
gloated

....

gloated
yet justified
love spills over with ease
pouring profusing from my heart
catch me