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For your tempting pecs
I really got no desires
Stinking flesh meaningless

hey avalive, welcome to the thread, it's nice to see you writing haikus with us! btw, you're doing what i've done, too (usu. on the last line), the syllabic structure here is 5-7-5; you have 5-8-6. look forward to more of your contributions! :)

Stinking flesh meaningless.
No medal for this "hero,"
alone on the sand.

alone on the sand
william blake thinks up one
more poetic line

more poetic line[s]
flow serpentine and languid,
caressing the mind.


(Shut up. :D I can, too, do that.)

caressing the mind
ideas in books leap forth and
penetrate my eyes

penetrate my eyes
with cold steel stares that shiver
their way to the floor.

Sorry, I couldn't resist the Carrick thing *^_^*

¬_¬;; My A-Level English Literature exam is on Othello.....

CAN'T ANY OF YOU PEOPLE PEN A DECENT ENDING? THINK OF THE THE NEXT POOR SOUL TO TRY AND JOIN THE THREAD!

Lol, only joking!

Their way to the floor
Life flashes by, an instant
Of complete freedom

:d

of complete freedom,
for some of the fun is en-
ding on an odd note

ROFLMAO

Amuse i love you more and more each day!

likewise!! :)

ding on an odd note
dong on the even ones
keep beat with the bell

keep beat with the bell
rat-a-tat-tat - no not the
drum the bell, you there! :D

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Originally posted by HaloDestroyer
CAN'T ANY OF YOU PEOPLE PEN A DECENT ENDING? THINK OF THE THE NEXT POOR SOUL TO TRY AND JOIN THE THREAD!

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Hehe sorry, HD! I usually pay very close attention to that, but i was frazzled by my own first line and so relieved to have all the syllables drop into place that I didn't even consider what I was leaving for the next person. It's a real aberration for me, I'll remember this time. :D

LOL@az and VB. You two crack me up. :D It's turning into a Dr. Suess thread, isn't it? That would be much easier.....hmm... no, I decline temptation.

Drum the bell, you there!
Let your melody ring forth.
Pound the world's eardrums.