Time marches onward
with age we get all mixed up
shoot two lines per head!
Kiz...sorry...I again got mixed up,,or rather carried away!Ah!
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Time marches onward
with age we get all mixed up
shoot two lines per head!
Kiz...sorry...I again got mixed up,,or rather carried away!Ah!
today comes to soon
Kiz, mazHur's 'heart' is here but his 'mind' is back in 'Shared Haiku'....hummm...he means well and just get a little carried away with his poetic enthusiasm....
Today comes to soon
mists of memory lingers
Z'allright, Maz! :)
today comes too soon
love seems to have its effect
Janine, you do read me well! Are you a 'phrenologist'?:)Quote:
Originally Posted by Janine
How bout....
today comes too soon
love seems to have its effect
lovers who must part
today comes too soon
mists of memory lingers
mind's dark recesses
hahaha..I am not sure I am that cerebral....what exactly is a phrenologist anyway...is that someone who studies brains or head shapes...duh? :lol:Quote:
Originally Posted by mazHur
LoL :lol:
And nice finishes, Janine. :)
Tiger lilies sway
For knowing more about phrenology, and for vocal convenience, you will have to bring your ear close to my mouth! :) ;)Quote:
Originally Posted by Janine
Tiger lilies sway
Dappling more tender blossoms
ou la la.........:lol:Quote:
Originally Posted by mazHur
Tiger lilies sway
Dappling more tender blossoms
In fragrant twilight
Kiz, thanks and I love your first line above! Glad you are back in Haiku's. I see you were up late last night.Quote:
LoL
And nice finishes, Janine
In fragrant twilight
moth whispered into the ear
of the flower-love!
Quote:
Originally Posted by mazHur
mazHur, I am wild about your new Haiku; but I hate to inform you - we are in 3
Person Haiku - oops that brain of yours got mixed up again with your heart. :lol:
Just use your last line as the new one......
I am sooo sorry, Janine and all here...for the brief 'fits' of romance that i am having!! Please forgive me for that !!;)Quote:
Originally Posted by Janine
It's ok, mazhur....hey, dream on.....it's cyberspace. I will take the liberty to post that last line of yours since it's quite lovely.....Quote:
Originally Posted by mazHur
Line by mazHur
of the flower-love
Mine added
of the flower-love
D.H.Lawrence embraced thoughts
blossoms free, naturalQuote:
Originally Posted by Janine
lovely haiku...I have taken the liberty to use your extemporaneous 3rd line as can't think of a better one!:)
'dream on as you will'
Hahah...now we really did it! Just use that line as my last one. I forgot too and started to finish the haiku but then edited it. I must have been too slow...:lol:Quote:
Originally Posted by mazHur
haha! What are we upto? Romanticizing, you too?:)Quote:
Originally Posted by Janine
Always romanticizing.....DHL fan! hhaha.....so here is the complete poem.....
of the flower-love
D.H.Lawrence embraced thoughts
blossoms free, natural
spring buds cause sneezing
spring buds cause sneezing
keep a hankie on your nose
spring buds cause sneezing
keep a hankie on your nose
nasal spray nearby....
nasal spray nearby
to dull sensations of scent
nasal spray nearby
to dull sensations of scent
Finally..........relief!
oops, mixed up again...
Oops, mixed up again...
caught in a tangle of words
[Hey Janine, I was indeed up late last night. Tonight too, sadly! I think I drink way too much coffee...] :eek:
Oops, mixed up again...
caught in a tangle of words
mem'ry eludes me.
Funny, Kiz, love 'tangle of words'....good one! Hhaah...that's me too - staying up too late...drinking coffee to late, too and ....usually on here obsessed with Haiku in the wee hours of the morning. Thunderstorms coming tonight; so I won't be online much. Have Haiku fun! J
Forsooth! Thunder storm!
Forsooth! Thunder storm!
Ancient tree split into shards
Forsooth! Thunder storm!
Ancient tree split into shards
Gods have won again
How can I see God?
how can I see God?
in the unexplainable
how can I see God?
in the unexplainable
mystics meditate
I saw him once and...
I saw him once and
we strolled in heaven awhile
I saw him once and
we strolled in heaven awhile
that day...time stands still
I saw him once and
we strolled in heaven awhile
infinite moments
that day...time stands still
thoughts' pendulum suspended
that day...time stands still
thoughts' pendulum suspended
us — eternity
Love without sex is