ending a haiku
is painful for the poet
but in with the new
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ending a haiku
is painful for the poet
but in with the new
but in with the new
way of ending a haiku:
use a contraction
:D
***Oopsie -- I meant "conjunction." Duh. *scoops some more grey matter into head*
use a contraction
she said hopefully to me
i don't think i won't
500!!!
**Whoo! congrats and cats and bats and flats and spats and gnats and momerats to you!
I don't think I won't
use a double negative,
said the English prof. :p
said the English prof:
"I'd rather be flying kites,
than writing haikus".
That's another **** annoying way of ending a Haiku!
Congrats VBM!
*AP
btw em and vbm, mea culpa- i usually only do that to be funny, but last night was exhausted and didn't even notice!!
than writing haikus
with them -- should begin "rather,"
-- she should be reading.
she should be reading
in the dead house of the night
instead she fights dreams
instead she fights dreams,
staring backwards in her head,
unconscious and trapped.
~*500*~
unconcious and trapped
twisted metal surrounding
onlookers whisper
congrats on the big five oh oh, btw Em.
Thanks, VB! I'd like to thank my mother, my father, god, uppers...
Onlookers whisper.
Yes, I'm shopping at Wal-mart.
Freaks need shampoo too.
Okay, fine, I'm not gonna let this thing die. I'm responding to my own haiku. I'm a hypocrite, sue me. :p
Freaks need shampoo too,
for to wash their tattooed scales.
Beautiful horror.
Beautiful horror
Sorrow sometimes delightful
Lifetimes portmanteau
lifetimes portmanteau
stashed in back of mind's closet
to later reminisce
(yeah I know it's 6 syllables :p )