where night saunters
Day would never dare approach
Here will pain fester
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where night saunters
Day would never dare approach
Here will pain fester
Here will pain fester
Even by this clean, clear pond
In gentle sunlight
In gentle sunlight
The flesh slowly separates
Intense sweet perfume
Intense sweet perfume
Followed fine Titania,
Walking through the woods.
Walking through the woods
i chanced upon a hawk caught
in a spider's web
In a spider's web
I spied a vast web of time,
Twined by tiny legs.
Twined by tiny legs.
I stared and I'm amazed
For the world can give and take
A reminder adil: syllables per line should be 5 7 5. Not 5 6 7.
world can give and take
And time, a pointed steel blade
spins on a table
Spins on a table
Proceeded the shiny coin -
Who would win or lose?
Who would win or lose
If we all co-operate:
Anarchy football.
They would sit there, watch
They would sit there until time passed
I now say to act
"A being who dons a lime-green tie is the one you have to watch the longest"-Quote:
Originally Posted by Golding15BF
L.N.S
I now say to act
Wired for contemplation
We need meditate
We need meditate
On emptiness, forgetting,
Nothing remembered.
Nothing remebered
capasity to learn is lost
What a waste of time!
What a waste of time?
Learning not through mind record
Is meditation.
Is meditation
A path to self creation?
Annihilation..
Annihilation....
Ah Nirvana, like a long
Neverending drink.
Neverending drink
For immortal imbibers
Nectar of the gods
Nector of the gods
Known as Ambrosia
Seductive poison
Seductive poison
But aren't they all seductive?
Allure of danger
Allure of danger
Brings forth the brain of passions
Scents of no account
Scents of no account
The curse of poverty looms
The world is stopped
The world is stopped
The human is again stooped
Yet love looms above
Yet love looms above
Small comfort when pondering
What dread looms below
:eek:
What dread looms below
Rotting wood, subsiding earth
Nutritious soil
Nutritious soil
Which gives rise to good above
We come full circle
*funny, as soon as i read "Nutritious soil" i knew who'd written it above*
we come full circle,
skirting delays (like rhomboids
and bold obstinance).
And bold obstinance
Controls the stubborn angry,
Who guides all others.
Who guides all others
But he that knows the nothing
To be the plenum
To be the plenum,
One must begin with one's self,
And spread like fire.
And spread like fire,
Wild and true burning to show
Exposing the truth
Exposing the truth
Unspeakable. Unspoken.
There for all to see.
There for all to see
is my undying pride that
I will always be.
I will always be
Awful at writing haikus
Because I have absolutely no idea how many syllables the last line is supposed to contain. I mean, my haikus start off okay but then they always seem to degenerate into a verbal morass of rambling incoherence. If anyone has any advice about how I might improve the structure of my haikus then let me know. Thanks a million and one.
well done that man, mine is also dismal with a hint of the really bad
Because I have absolutely no idea how many syllables the last line is supposed to contain. I mean, my haikus start off okay but then they always seem to degenerate into a verbal morass of rambling incoherence. If anyone has any advice about how I might improve the structure of my haikus then let me know. Thanks a million and one.
this isnt going to well
better to give up
Hi,
I've been asked to edit my post so that the fun can continue unabated. Here goes...
I will always be
A slave to an acrid quill
Moved by Satire's hand
How's that? The back of my hand was pressed against my forehead as I wrote it so I hope it's sufficiently lofty and serious in tone. If not I can re-draft.
Moved by Satire's hand
Across the desolation
I stumble aloof
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well done ryan, welcome to the club.. :wave:
ok ill do it seriously to
Moved by satires hand
nope cant do it the nextperson will have to follow on from ryan
Ryan Dollard and dejosc, I'm going to ask you once to please refrain from hijacking/insulting and generally disrespecting these forums.
They consist of members of all ages and many members who's first language is not english, therefore, our Forum Rules are set out to foster a friendly and positive atmosphere :)