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Originally Posted by ;7807

Ok, so, I write a haiku, then the next poster uses the last line of myhaiku... k? ;)

Haiku:
1. A Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

2. A poem written in this form.


what will you become
anything you want to be
Truth in time will tell

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You neglected an important "rule" of haiku--that is it must involve or reflect nature to be pure haiku. Therefore, what you wrote is not haiku.

Avoiding action
Can be seen as simply a
Safe way to live life.

safe way to live life
avoiding the yellow signs
all is avoidence

All is avoidance
Never ceasing metronome
Pacing to and fro

Pacing to and fro,
mind in grey consternation,
called by slim colors.

Called by slim colors
I am, to a life of new
beauty for my love.

Beauty for my love
Sold by the ounce in sachets
Marketing folly

Marketing folly
Love in a bottle- what made
You think they'd want this?

Hi Drama and MissC!

You think they'd want this?
To be left all alone again
We'll see how it ends

You think theyd want this?
Peace pipes tossed for pack o' smokes
Reminiscent tears

hi janine! oh, look we did it simultaneously! to the same minute even, how cool :) But both our last lines seem to go well together, let the next person put one in between :D

Reminiscent tears
Why must it come down to this?
We'll see how it ends

Consider it fixed! Hi Drame! :wave: Hi Janine!

Hey Miss C! great job stringing our lines together

We'll see how it ends
Zealous eyes vacuum each word
Climatic goodbyes

Climactic goodbyes
A passionate kiss farewell
This is real life, yes?

Thanks Drame, how goes it?

This is real life, yes?
Illusion strikes hard
Alienation
:alien:

It goes bittersweet as always....., yourself?