he has made his choice.
walking toward the ringing phone,
a smile lights his eyes.
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he has made his choice.
walking toward the ringing phone,
a smile lights his eyes.
A smile lights his eyes
The arrow flew true to the heart
Aim- let the string loose
dang beat out by MC
Sorry!... Really am sorry. I liked that one, so it got doen really fast...
merriment and style
adorn her enticing soul -
irresistible
ahhh the broken haiku i will try to fix...Susan the thread is haiku, and i really like yours, but you should take the last line of the person before you and use it in the begining of yours so without further ado
Aim let loose the string
sweet music emanates thus
merriment and style
to which yours follows
merriment and style
adorn her enticing soul
irresistible
Irresistible
The soft touch of a lover
When your heart beats sound
at the risk of receiving more chastisement (this time for writing a PM on a haiku chain...someone was reprimanded earlier for this), I want to defend myself against the last chastisement... (:
I understand how the chain works and adhere to the rules. 2 people had posted haiku using my last line 'a smile lights his eyes'. I posted according to the final one, as dictated by martial haiku law. (truly, I am smiling...no great offense taken!) I came back a few minutes ago and found the note asking me to follow the rules. I did. The ku that I followed has been deleted, though. Thus, I am left with no evidence. I apologize.
Tis fine Susan. Nothing to be ashamed of. All is forgiven (even if I speak out of my forum turn, I will defend you and know exactly how it feels to respond to a ku that no longer exists...)
All is well, Susan!
When your heart beats loud
each nook and corner warmed
by that sense of life.
By that sense of life
Quality of it was shaped
By crystal fingers
By crystal fingers
cascading brilliant light
reinvigorate
reinvigorate
lemon scented soap and fizz
foretells fadeing cares
Foretells fading cares
And laminated losses
Paints with black and white
Paints white with black
The innocence amazes
Children sit wide eyed