Animal Farm

Your essay was great! I'm in the 8th grade and I had to write an essay about Animal Farm. Your essay helped me a lot and I thank you for that. <br><br>P.S. Those anonymous people who say that your essay is nothing needs to get some glasses.

And no, i'm not gonna just copy you're essay. I had a plan to do an essay much like yours, and with your permission, I would like to use some of your sited sources. Of course, my essay will be different, because my teacher is very specific on essays, and to copy yours would be dishonorable and plagerism. I just wanted to thank you because I had no idea where to get some sources for my subject. I hope you recieved a good grade, because where I'm standing, you deserve at least a B, and I really needed something to guide me on my own essay. Again, thanks for the road map, and now I'm off to write my own essay!

Orwell had a bitter hatred towards Stalinism and in fact this novel was quite pointed at the Soviet Union. He also argued that, if such was the choice, it would be better to be part of the American empire than under the thumb of Russia. <br>When I first read this book when I was 14 it blew me away. I understood exactly what the point of the story was. I was so envolved I could relate the anguish that the animals were going through.<br>I read it over a week-end and when I got back to school on Monday my teacher was amazed and I ended up taking this part of the English class.<br>To this day I understand the "spirit" of Comunisim -making people free and everybody getting a "fair share"- but unfortunately due to human nature (pride and greed) there will be people who are just in it for themselves.<br>Think how Boxer worked so hard for the windmill only to disapear. Many many people worked hard for the idea that comunisim set forth but ended up disapearing under Stalin's rule. He also orchestrated a massive famine in the Ukraine in which an estimated 5 million people died. It is believed that with the purges, forced famines, state terrorism, labor camps, and forced migrations, Stalin was responsible for the death of as many as 40 million people within the borders of the Soviet Union. According to former National Security Advisor to US President Jimmy Carter, Zbigniew Brzezinski, Stalin murdered an estimated 20 million people. Stalin killed more of his own people than Hitler did Jews. (6 million Jews died in WWII).<br><br>Stalin ended up being no different than the Czar in the end and Russia ended up worse than what it was before.<br> <br>Marx had a dream that everyone could participate and be looked after, no classes in society and the poor and needy looked after in our society, but I don't think that he saw that human nature is self serving not serving others. <br><br>There is much more depth to be found in this novel.<br><br>

In a couple of days , i will wright an essay about animal farm and i think yours is such a good essay that i can just say it is `perfect`. I would like to use your essay as an help , sent by God to me. Thank you very much .

I believe that this essay wasn't "trash" as this anonymous person has been writing, I think that they have overlooked the whole point in the assignment and have tied in what their assignment may have been into what yours was, making it "trash". You have potential to become an incredible writer, if you keep up this way then you will surely do extremely well. I do have to agree, there were some points that were overlooked, like the critisism of the Allies as well. If the essay had of been longer it would have been much better, I have to say; in making it shorter your points weren't as strong as they could have been (and by the looks of it, you could easily make them stronger). otherwise, a truly excellent essay that surely deserves much credit!

Bloody brilliant !! Your essay is excellent, congrats.

I found your paper when searching through the internet get a better understanding of the novel. My english 10 honors class is doing a project on it and I was confusing about it a bit. Your paper is good. I liked reading it. It wasn't one of those boring papers that babble on about nothing ( like most of mine do lol) anyways, good job!

Damn u wrote this a long time ago. I have to tell you though, i did like your essay. The following things impressed me:<br> - Frequent connections between book and Revolution<br> - Good use of Topic Sentences<br> - You did NOT drift off on a tangent<br> - You were very 'to the point'.<br><br>Overall...Good Call

I just started reading Animal Farm. I have been doing some light research on Russia's history to help me to understand the book's symbols. Your paper was very helpful... thanks!

hi Giovanna <br>i read your essay and it is wonderful <br>it is really well done <br>Congratulations

Karl Marx didn't get his principles wrong. Stalin, Mao, and Castro did. Don't confuse Marx's Scientific Socialism with tyrannical communism. People mistake marxism with stalinism, the first being a utopian view of society and the second the distortion of Marx's ideals. So please, study more about politics and don't let yourself be fooled by this cold war american propaganda!!!!

I think your essay was very well done, being a lover of the book myself I wanted to read it. One suggestion if I may, you might want to use more transition words in the essay (ie hitherto, therefore, lastly, secondly etc) By the way, what did you get on it? What grade was this for? All in all, good job.

I love this book and while I was reading and still, I wonder what role the character of Moses plays. I was thinking amybe the role of religion, as it was banded and how he kept leaving and coming back. Some animals believed him, maybe he represented what Lenin said "Religion is the opiate of the masses"<br><br>[email protected] e-mail me with your thoughts or just post it here

i am in yr 10 and we're doing animal farm. our teacher works us really hard and i was trying to find out a bit more about the book, your essay was really helpful, it was really interesting and thankyou for putting out your work for others to read.

Sorry to be harsh...but that essay was rather institutionalised. you had a strong factual basis and that was excellent, but you could have ommitted the details that didnt fit in, you just slotted them in or tried to make a sentence for them, this was blatantly obvious and a major downfall of your essay. From this essay i have gathered that you dont have much of a natural writing talent, this is an insult to the great Orwell and his great literary works<br>replied by a 15 year old....how bad must you feel