Poetry, one word at a time

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life

welcome bongitybongbong, I love your name.... :banana:

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of



(I liek how this is turning out, it worked out well wouldn't you say?) :nod:

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny

(someone should do the punctuation, lol, begins to look ... weird without comas)

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to

You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the great divide.
Brought to revive,
while you mysteriously hide face.
Oh why there is a chase?
Oh life my treasure
Oh child of destiny
Where is the one who brought to breath