Ineptitude is
something which really disturbs
the core of myself.
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Ineptitude is
something which really disturbs
the core of myself.
Flamboyance projects
pride and conceit,
antipathy and wrath,
and the other faculties
which degrade the body and soul...
Hi! The only "Rule"
to follow in this Thread is,
"Be not obscene, please."
Also, please be sure
to use the standard Haiku
format from now on.
:thumbs_up
Thank you.
Sincerely,
Uncle Lar
I hope I won't be
Haikuless; I really love
the Haiku format!
:thumbs_up
Time Management, in
this high tech day and age, is
very important.
The Weekend has come,
and I depart to enjoy
it; have a good one!
Sincerely,
Uncle Lar
:thumbs_up
Get a clue, Sherlock—
Shock poetry not stylish
Anymore here these days…
Write of love and pain—
Ecstasy and broken dreams
Show us—do not tell…
How does rejection
Really tear a heart—rip it
Apart, make you cry?
A tender moment,
How it seems to last forever—
Replayed in your dreams…
Tears fall like the rain—
Heart shatters, glass imprisoned—
Joy soars on the wind…
Let us have beauty—
Come tempt us—flirtatious words
Even darkness made real…
Pendragon
© 4/21/07
we know where we are,
when life's Hell brings pain,
we have few to guide us
through immolation lane
Talk of happiness--
Elated thoughts,
to curtail the strain,
we feel from antagnostic eyes,
seeping life turned old,
from wisps of abound aesthetics,
to dreams turned obscured mold
--like Saruman's oscillating eye,
whites of pupils supplanted gold--
(sorry, I don't know the standard Haiku format)
'Dole, a Haiku has seventeen syllables, divided thus:Quote:
Originally Posted by Adolescent09
5 in the first line
7 in the second
5 in the third
To do a poem in Haiku, connect Haiku until you reach your point. Here, no form to follow. On the other thread, last line of the previous Haiku becomes the first line of the next, so follow suit. You can still get amazing results!
Taking time to explain
The rules and regulations—
Just shows that you care…
We are here for fun,
Writing is our green playground—
Leave none misinformed…
Common courtesy,
Once shown, will be remembered—
And returned in kind
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Haiku is not hard;
just follow the Haiku Rules
and craft your Language.
Then you'll understand
How very easy it is
to start writing them
I so love Haikus
I scribble them all the time
for my enjoyment
I once wrote Haikus
over and over one day
Then my hand was tired
Now I have to leave
For the bell tolleth for me
I now go to school
(good bye!)