wow janine, that was brilliant!!
Like glee of sun threads
Celestial patterns of sky
Windy paintbrushes
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wow janine, that was brilliant!!
Like glee of sun threads
Celestial patterns of sky
Windy paintbrushes
the PAM and the PAPAM's haiku are both Bloody Brilliant! :thumbs_up:
Windy paintbrushes
Cursed red paint of ribboned sin,
She wanted to die
She wanted to die
Foiled by her former friend,
THE VIGILANTE.
The VIGILANTE
Forced to act against his will
Like a torn puppet
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It doesn't make any sense, does it?:(
Like a torn puppet
Connor jerks, hops, and lunges
He's trying to dance.
He's trying to dance
Just waiting for his lady love
The clock strikes midnight
The clock strikes midnight
David in his lonely cell
Thinking about Eve.
Thinking about Eve
David stirs, mumbles, in his sleep
Longing to hold her
Longing to hold her,
Awakens to her scream, and
The wrong kind of guilt.
The wrong kind of guilt
Pierces, like earth pushed to hell
He wants to revenge
He wants to revenge,
Fallen German pilot is
Angry, but humbled.
Angry but humbled,
The pilot wants to feed on
Wreckages of dreams
I just love literary allusions. And thoroughly flattered that you've read my work. :blush:
Wreckages of dreams
Of glory in sky battle
They're burning away...
No biggie. Actually, it is a pleasure to read your work.. im a big fan.:thumbs_up *rushes to get pen and paper to get Robin's autograph*Quote:
Originally Posted by RobinHood3000
They're burning away
Stardusts from comets and dreams
Let me bid farewell
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i really have to go, -eat dinner. Lain's getting mad..
pleasure Haikuing with ya, mate..:D
"Let me bid farewell!"
Cries David in his dreams, but
Too late - she has gone...