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Delightful ! :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: interior, wings, nostalgic, buttercup, waltz, gracefully
Buttercup Waltz
I listen to the Buttercup Waltz
and imagine you dancing gracefully
with the wings of a færie queen
a nostalgic delight interiorizing
10/29/2023
Next: constellation, mountain, falcon, endless, slant, devotion
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
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A graceful poem!
Challenge accepted!
Next: constellation, mountain, falcon, endless, slant, devotion
Mirror
In endless devotion
to a constellation,
a proud falcon lived
on a slanted mountain
A proud falcon lived
on a slanted mountain
in endless devotion
to a constellation.
Next: captain, sea, vessel, hurricane, toss, horizon.
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Enjoyed ! Each line: 1234 / 3412... interesting form... similar to a chiasmus, but not :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: captain, sea, vessel, hurricane, toss, horizon
a captain's captain
in a stout vessel sea tossed -
a hurricane blown in from
the horizon in double quick fashion
down with the sails! and clear the
decks ! batten down the hatches!
and thrice check for leaks!
time to race with the devil mates!
10/29/2023
Next: passing, sorrow, family history, rejoice, Autumn, respite
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
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Enjoyed the dramatic poem!
Challenge accepted!
Next: passing, sorrow, family history, rejoice, Autumn, respite
Autumn,
For some
Autumn
with its stern preparation of winter
is a season
of sorrow,
of remembering family history.
and the passing of members.
For others it is a time to rejoice
a season of respite,
of celebration of the harvest
of the riches of the soil.
Next:rules,bracelet, earrings, waterfall, distant,ouroboros
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"a season of respite"... Enjoyed ! :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: rules, bracelet, earrings, waterfall, distant, ouroboros
Magisterial Beauty
Talismans in her possession -
an ouroboros bracelet in gold,
Möbius platinum earrings
with an extra twist to display
an infinity symbol befitting her
icy-blond waist-length hair, a
ring inset with ruby fashioned by
a distant bygone era færie king,
and lastly a necklace beaten
from otherworldly chondrules
into a serpentine chain string
that cascaded like a waterfall
over her silver brocade bodice
in starlight she shone
brighter than a jealous moon
in pure majesty
10/29/2023 r. 10/30/2023 (magistery>pure majesty)
Next: efflorescence, retrograde, solarium, midnight, mesmerize, weave
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
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Impressive description, with an extra note for the chondrules!;)
Challenge accepted!
Next: efflorescence, retrograde, solarium, midnight, mesmerize, weave
The dance of the planets
At midnight the solarium was effervescent
if not efflorescent.
The planets were holding their own party.
The sun displayed majesty and crown jewels.
Luna appeared resplendent in her silver dress.
A mesmerizing Venus appeared hand in hand
with Mars exibiting his war medals on his powerful chest.
Meanwhile Mercury tried out the dance floor in company of several young stars.
Genial Jupiter immersed himself in interminable arguments with Neptune about the rings of Saturn.
The latter had excused himself of the party,
being rather put out and grumpy because
in retrograde condition.
Uran announced the next revolution.
But Pluto who hadn't said a word hitherto
gave a sign to the musicians,
and everybody hit the floor,
weaven into the usual pattern
of the horoscope.
Next: market, lobster,usually, vendors, lottery, flowers.
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Wonderful ! "But Pluto who hadn't said a word hitherto / gave a sign to the musicians, / and everybody hit the floor, / weaven into the usual pattern / of the horoscope." :)
Challenge accepted !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
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Challenge: market, lobster, usually, vendors, lottery, flowers
about circle
at an outdoor market
vendors plied their goods
flowers, crawdads -
like mini lobsters,
and vegetables, etc.
a modern day bazaar
usually I went for the
ambience: rich aromas
from food stalls,
diverse music, and
people watching - but
today I hit the lottery
... so to speak
in a booth of second hand
castoffs was a shoebox
of letters once bound
by thin rubber bands
first lured by the stamps
I found a letter sent
by myself in fact
many years prior to my
mother containing my
very first written poem
words I had forgotten -
a doggerel expounding
my newfound happiness
in a new home as close to
paradise, and another -
a letter by an ex which
brought me to tears -
of plans for a family
which never came to pass
11/1/2023 r.
Next: ambient music, journal, orange, angel, parfum
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
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Moving poem,tailor!
Challenge accepted!
Next: ambient music, journal, orange, angel, parfum, nuance
Alice
Alice fell asleep in her room
before the open journal.
She suddenly saw herself
sitting in a beautiful garden
The air was scented
with a parfum of oranges
hanging profusely
from the trees
in several nuances of colors.
Birds off all kinds
provided the ambience music.
From affar one couldn´t sense
the silent smile of the Chester cat.
Alice woke up
as suddenly
as she had fallen asleep.
No, no humans in the garden,
neither angels.
Next: farm, cows, pasture, landmark, memories, rendering.
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Enjoyed ! "The air was scented / with a parfum of oranges" :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: farm, cows, pasture, landmark, memories, rendering
three cows in a pasture
beneath billowy clouds and
memories of blue skies -
three cows graze in a pasture
behind a rail fence - Monet's
pastel rendering of a pastoral
farm scene - the only landmark
a stand of trees and their
shadows midst green grass; all
seemingly applied with a sponge
11/3/2023
Next: early, oceanside, conch, glass, glisten, cypress
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
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Enjoyed this picture of a picture!:)
Challenge accepted!
Next: early, oceanside, conch, glass, glisten, cypress
Under the cypress
Here am I
far away
evoking a summer day.
An early walk
on the oceanside
a conch glistening like glass
and the small waves
playing at our feet.
Next: Rhineland, forest, incline, fox, hiding, envy.
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Love your poem: "a conch glistening like glass / and the small waves / playing at our feet." :)
Challenge accepted !
Lol... one of my poems from this thread, archers in the midst (I also used as a poem challenge on our Tuesdays at Two poetry group), was published in our local newspaper... a first :)
Challenge accepted !
Challenge: Rhineland, forest, incline, fox, hiding, envy
the air in the forest
the air in the forest,
as so I am inclined
is as refreshing as
a Rhineland sparkling
wine and as heady
as a fox in hiding,
the envy of the land
11/4/2023
Next: sheep, snow, flourish, aware, bumblebee, dimple
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
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Sent a PM :)
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
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Thanks!
Enjoyed your forest poem.
Congrats on your published poem. I tried to find it but got a bit confused with the many newspapers of El Dorado.
Challenge accepted!
Next: sheep, snow, flourish, aware, bumblebee, dimple
Sheep standing in the snow ...
Sheep standing in the snow,
Aware of the flourishing flight
of the bumblebee.
Dimpled plastic dolls dance on the walk.
Next:rosewood, pergola, chiming, indignant, rainbow , underground.