no feed to your past
your world a stranger to one
I who knew you best
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no feed to your past
your world a stranger to one
I who knew you best
I who knew you best
Knew you would forget the doe.
This is where it ends.
This is where it ends
The moment of truth and lies
The answer's with you
The answer's with you.
Do you even know the question,
you who speaks to flies?
Silly last line, but what the heck. :D
well it is a challenge that's for sure.....
you who speaks to flies?
perhaps they commune with worms
the grave lies open wide
Sorry.:lol:Quote:
Originally Posted by Janine
The grave lies open wide
And has a voice of its own.
It whispers softly.
Good night Janine. Perhaps tomorrow. :)
It whispers softly
subtle electricity
of words unspoken
Marriage is trying
Each year a challenge more steep
My heart is crying
Hi Reisa, did you get my email? Glad to see you again but I am going to depart soon. Watching a movie - in between.
Nite Virgil.....
whoops - where did I pick up that line Marriage is trying. Thought that was Reisa's h. must have had wrong page. Wait did you revise and change your Haiku, R?
Hi Janine, yes you are too quick...I self edited the Marriage is Trying bit...:lol:
poor husband.
good night to you...see you soon.
Of words unspoken
Verse of hands scripted slowly
Canvas of shoulders
I do that a lot but no one catches me - been lucky so far. Goodnight and have a good restful sleep ;)Quote:
Originally Posted by Riesa
Canvas of shoulders
White and smooth as silken down
Vision of beauty
Vision of beauty
Beauty and the Beast's Belle and rose.
I will eat your life.
:D
I will eat your life
Peel off the rind, spit the seeds
hungry now for more
I don't know about others, but I really like to read from one creative haiku to the next without all the chat. I believe there is a chat forum....not trying to be mean. This was just a response to comments after the God of Haiku two or three pages earlier.