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12-01-2006, 06:02 PM
dramasnot6

oh no i looked at the wrong page for haikus! *fixes*
Like slovenly swine
Shoots the nursing baby dow
Meat devoured raw
12-01-2006, 07:32 PM
Janine

Quote:

Originally Posted by Susan Sonnen

the rush is on!
cash registers caroling,
shoppers bustling

Hi Susan - :D I Love your Haiku! love the "cash registers caroling"- great image for, say Pixar Studios. I could see that in one of their movies.

dramasmot6 - what did you do anyway? what is the next line to start with....confused? :(
12-01-2006, 08:07 PM
Virgil

Meat devoured raw
on a mountain in Peru.
No sticks for fire wood.
12-01-2006, 08:18 PM
Riesa

No sticks for fire wood
we burn only llama poo
Try some smoked vulture?
12-01-2006, 09:23 PM
brainstrain

My grandparent's house
Long ago was reluinquished (pardon my spelling)
Vanished from my life

my grandparents house, the place in my icon-thingy to the left, was sold when they were declared legally insane...

and, of course, continuing the group haiku:

Try some smoked vulture?
I would really rather not
Rabbit is better.
12-01-2006, 09:40 PM
Virgil

rabbit is better
as filler for a beef stew.
Toothpick meat from teeth.
12-01-2006, 09:49 PM
toni

Quote:

Originally Posted by dramasnot6

Sure am! And I am honored to be the first one to commend you on that fantastic haiku! i think we both know who we can assciate it with....aww to be with movie stars in Italy....*dayddreams a little*;) :D
Midnight, have to flee
Prekarious slipper stays
Marital mistake

I know who ya mean..:blush:

Quote:

Originally Posted by Virgil

Hey I love that one. Very nice, toni. :thumbs_up

Thank You, Uncle Virg! I don't get compliments from My Loving Uncle before, it feels Gooooood..:D

Quote:

Originally Posted by dramasnot6

Live as a hermit
Forever finding mirage
Sandstorm masquerade

i LOOOVVEE that one!:lol:

Quote:

Originally Posted by Virgil

rabbit is better
as filler for a beef stew.
Toothpick meat from teeth.

toothpick meat from teeth
Rabbits went on holiday
What do we eat next?
12-01-2006, 10:31 PM
Virgil

Quote:

Originally Posted by toni

IThank You, Uncle Virg! I don't get compliments from My Loving Uncle before, it feels Gooooood..:D

Oh really? Well, I'll make a point to give you more. ;)

What do we eat next?
Pretzels with spicy mustard?
No, potato skins.
12-01-2006, 10:34 PM
toni

Oh, why, thank you! Just don't give me compliments when I don't deserve it, okay, Uncie?

No, potato skins
Spring rolls with turnips, why not?
Just count calories
12-01-2006, 10:37 PM
Virgil

Just count calories
when you sit at the table.
But don't digest yet.
12-01-2006, 10:46 PM
toni

But don't digest yet
Of Big and small intestines
Gizzards are roaring
12-01-2006, 10:51 PM
Virgil

Quote:

Originally Posted by toni

But don't digest yet
Of Big and small intestines
Gizzards are roaring

:sick: But a good haiku. ;)

Gizzards are roaring,
Bubbling like boiling water.
Should I out the gas?
12-01-2006, 10:59 PM
toni

I know :bawling:Sorry.:D

Should I out the gas?
Or paint with words with a friend?
The latter, I say

____
Im not gonna HAIKU anymore, Uncle Virg, I am an obvious born Failure at this form of poetry.:(
12-01-2006, 11:04 PM
Janine

Hi Virgil, Some nice poems, but I did not like the rabbit ones. I used to have two bunnies. Really nasty to eat them! Meany Virgil, shame on you...cute little bunnies!

Glad someone else got your line...

The latter, I say
Then I go away to think
Of better Haiku
12-01-2006, 11:27 PM
Virgil

Quote:

Originally Posted by toni

Im not gonna HAIKU anymore, Uncle Virg, I am an obvious born Failure at this form of poetry.:(

Why do you say that? You're good. :thumbs_up

Of better haiku
I pledge to write tonight.
No more eating pets. :D

How's that Janine?