never mind squatters
they won't tell if you don't and
you might be grateful
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never mind squatters
they won't tell if you don't and
you might be grateful
you might be grateful
for the warmth left in the fire
after ashes form
after ashes form
and blacken the fireplace
where's your final line?
(Fixed :D )
after ashes form
and blacken the fireplace
where's your final line?
where's your final line?
after epilogue's finish
could be a sequel
Sorry, I thought we were using the last line of one haiku to start another. :goof:Quote:
Originally Posted by just mercedes
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Originally Posted by krymsonkyng
I'm impressed with that
cleverly fixed, well done mate...
you're quick on the draw!
:lol:
ah, but we are... thing is you need to leave us a last line to use ;) since you obliged this time (and with flattery too...)Quote:
Originally Posted by Red-Headed
you're quick on the draw!
gunslinger of bygone times
dirt caked grizzly grin
(your turn friend)
dirt caked grizzly grin
for God's sake, please get a shave
wash that grime away!
wash that grime away?
the crime scene direly disturbed
vital prints obscured
vital prints obscured
detective on bagel break
murderer escaped!
murderer escaped!
twisted between silver bars
laughing in the night
laughing in the night
jealousy cuts vitals short
crime scene established
crime scene established
red feathers litter he ground
the cat is happy
the cat is happy
'cause he's on the road again
fodder for stories ;)
fodder for stories
A banquet for our tall tales
history eaten
history eaten
the rarer the better to
live it in Broadway
live it in Broadway
one life compelled to embrace
inspired by passion
Inspired by passion
epic tales pave the journey
a quest for knowledge
a quest for knowledge
a treasure chest of pages
bur'd between covers
bur'd between covers
lies this small exclusive world—
a two-member club
a two-member club
a 3 member family
no-one is alone
no one is alone
the intimacy of two
pleasurable....yes
pleasurable....yes
floating on a bed of clouds
together...oh yes
together...oh yes
but what will happen soon, shall
separated, sad
separated, sad
doomed to live as a villain
varlet of the thieves
varlet of the thieves
Long I toil in night's valley
innocence eludes
innocence eludes-
daisies close at end of day
eyes can't see at night
eyes can't see at night
since the light of day is gone
only the witness
only the witness
left after the dust settles-
mind retains the truth
mind retains the truth
this is not reality
fantasy leave me!
Fantasy...leave me
I am ready to face it
Real consistency
Real consistency
poised between the bent pages
savour idioms
savour idioms
taste freedom in local speech-
ain't it just the way?
ain't it just the way?
all the trouble of calling,
get a lonely night.
Get a lonely night
Northern Lights hover for you
a special honour
a two-member club
third one appeared from somewhere
Only my girl knew!
It's seems I'm far back on the page!
a special honour
to be greeted by angels
falling from your eyes.
welcome back to the the future, Maz :lol: That's such a nice piece.Quote:
Originally Posted by mazHur
only my girl knew!
sadness as vast as ocean
falling from my eyes
post came up twice... it's all Maz's fault :alien: