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Originally Posted by Janine

gee, was that girl me? LOL :lol:
I will write a poem in a second, What did you think of the email reponses - were you happy with them or do you have other ideas for the Sh thread?

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Yes, but I think we better keep what was in them private. ;)

she was still lovely
as the breeze kissed her pale cheeks
and leaves circled 'round

Hey Uncle Virg, good evening! I like your haikus a lot! Giving a sort of different mood to each line makes it intersting. My thoughts travel far and wide and it is inspired! ;)

Dang! There are lots of good Haiku'ers in this forum. :thumbs_up::

And leaves circle 'round
The dark misty place haunts me
Like a horror film.

Like a horror film
The lights flicker on many faces
Fear decends upon the crowd

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Originally Posted by Laindessiel

Hey Uncle Virg, good evening! I like your haikus a lot! Giving a sort of different mood to each line makes it intersting. My thoughts travel far and wide and it is inspired! ;)

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Lain, what i try to do and it sometimes works and sometimes not is continue the sentence from the first line, but take it in a different direction than expected; then twist it again with the third line in a summary way but not obvious.

Yes, I am lovely - haha :lol: I get your drift about private - V!

Fear descends on the crowd
like fog upon a grass field.
He has a rifle.

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Originally Posted by Janine

Yes, I am lovely - haha :lol: I get your drift about private - V!

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I'm sure you are. ;)

That is right, Virgil, you are a pretty twisted person! LOL - sorry just getting tired, really it was cool advice. Hi L, how are you tonight?

He has a rifle
Hot metal in his tense grip
His heart left behind

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Originally Posted by Virgil

Lain, what i try to do and it sometimes works and sometimes not is continue the sentence from the first line, but take it in a different direction than expected; then twist it again with the third line in a summary way but not obvious.

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It works for me everytime! :)

He has a rifle.
And it went Bang! bang! bang! Bang!
All the people: Dead

All the people: Dead
They dont matter anyway
Useless stupid lives

I like yours better L...we must have posted same time! Now what?

Nice. That wasn't easy.

His heart left behind
for the girl who waved hi.
Short sandy hair curled.

now we have three - with same first line...everyone liked that rifle thingie!