Japanese Tanka game

Quote:

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Originally Posted by mazHur

my heart swings with joy
when I see little toddlers
playing happily
on the Literature Forums
with imagery of words

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Very nice. But since u have to write according to the topic given by the previous poster, would u mind dropping this to the thread for tiny poems? :)

Grapevines:
the woody body
holding the leafy branches
stayed still while the wind
kissed it; but danced in delight
the leaning tiny black pearls!

halloween

thank you, Symphony, for the guidance.
I now get your point on posting according to the previous topic ,,,

here is one on "Halloween'',,,,

don't hide your faces
by seeking quarter behind
thick,plumpy pumpkins
there is no need for beauty
to feign like vegetables


Eid

Look! The crescent moon
amongst a cluster of stars,
showering gala
o'er the breathlessly waiting
Muslims. Hey, Eid Mubarak! :D

Tomorrow's Eid (in Bangladesh). Though I'm not a Muslim myself, I'll like to wish each and every Muslim in here a nice day tomorrow, and to those who has already had it today, I can only hope u had a nice day. :)

Back to topic, the next subj. is: Weekends gone wrong.

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Originally Posted by symphony

Look! The crescent moon
amongst a cluster of stars,
showering gala
o'er the breathlessly waiting
Muslims. Hey, Eid Mubarak! :D

Tomorrow's Eid (in Bangladesh). Though I'm not a Muslim myself, I'll like to wish each and every Muslim in here a nice day tomorrow, and to those who has already had it today, I can only hope u had a nice day. :)

Back to topic, the next subj. is: Weekends gone wrong.

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Hi symphony

Thanks a lot for your Eid greetings. Yes, Muslims all over the world are celebrating this great annual festival of theirs. In here (Pakistan) Eid will be celebrated tomorrow. I wonder if you knew about it before I tagged.

thanks again for your kind wishes,,,

'' It must be pleasure
meeting my love yet unseen
at the Loveland tryst
but seeing her from afar
I knew my weekends gone wrong

Next: sanguinary

Retry:

I do not live by
moments that evaporate
like steam in the air
life moves on like floating clouds
what if some weekends went wrong

I really love this line..... :D

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Originally Posted by mazHur

thick,plumpy pumpkins

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sanguinary

within the borders
of exotic Myanmar
government rejects
the will of peaceful people
blood shed in confrontation


Nobel Prize

Lessing got the prize
Al gore stashed it away too
who else I don't know
but dynamite made Nobel
repent his own invention

Next: Gog Megog

I'll work on gut reaction to this one; I don't happen to know what the hell 'gog megog is' :)


breathing from the limbs
this foreign infestation
blips from each eye.
spiral codes whip with each flash
flaxen heros' libidos.



a flaxen hero's libido :)

flaxen heros' libidos
quench his thirst for holy things
love this crusader
the fire of love will kill him
lend him some of your orgasm

orgasm

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Originally Posted by mazHur

Hi symphony

Thanks a lot for your Eid greetings. Yes, Muslims all over the world are celebrating this great annual festival of theirs. In here (Pakistan) Eid will be celebrated tomorrow. I wonder if you knew about it before I tagged.

thanks again for your kind wishes,,,

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Of course I knew! It would've veen really funny not knowing about Eid while I'm living in an Islamic country with Muslims all around me as my bestest friends. :p


stirring the body
just underneath the warm skin,
the rising of a
dreamy desire, there's a
secret sun warming the soul....

An Irish Guitar

Quote:

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Originally Posted by symphony

Of course I knew! It would've veen really funny not knowing about Eid while I'm living in an Islamic country with Muslims all around me as my bestest friends. :p


stirring the body
just underneath the warm skin,
the rising of a
dreamy desire, there's a
secret sun warming the soul....

An Irish Guitar

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Hi
this is superb poesy. I like it.
where in globe is your tiny green speck?
chow!


come let me pluck you
let me tune you to music
let me stir your strings
let me sing a song for you
let me fall in love with you

topic?

nvm :lol:

sorry, the topic is ''freedom''