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Aaack posted at the same time!
Next haiku-er follow reisa's last line- Mine's usually flat anyways..:)

I want to hold you
and teach your aged innocence
how to laugh again.

how to laugh again
to give wisdom to the lines
like sad long ago

Like sad long ago
that dwells by no firelight
of rememberance.

Burn and rage away
Time will stalk the blazen sky
Ember of a day

whoops! Sorry not sure what happened?

:wave: Hi Janine. Did you follow all those messages?

Ember of the day
passes into late evening.
Whisper for me now.

Hi Virgil......Well, sort of understood them.......but the thing was I had to go out so I had to read them quickly. Now I am tired and overwhelmed with so many messages in my PM tonight. Too tired out to answer them all now.

That's ok. Not much to say. :)

I really want to watch a movie and relax. Did you get the gist of them and do you agree with the moderators on the question?

Here's my Haiku.....gang.....sorry to keep you waiting


Of rememberance
Fog of day long and tiresome
Memory broke through

your turn V, good opening line for you to start one.

*I'll add in Janine and Il Penseroso's posts*
**oops. i took too long thinking of what to write, sorry.**
Of remembrance
As the quiet embers
Scorched the night and day.

Sorry Janine! It's me here. Is it okay? :)

Memory broke through
Out of midst, into you
Love is what conquers

Memory broke through
of that girl from the deep past.
She was still lovely.

I think the plan for the Shakespeare thread is not bad as it turned out. :)

gee, was that girl me? LOL :lol:
I will write a poem in a second, What did you think of the email reponses - were you happy with them or do you have other ideas for the Sh thread?