Shared HAIKU ! Join in, it's fun!

theres a chain? woops

my first time on the forums in 6 months, sorry lol

i'll check next time. you can continue with snow drift if u like, just ignore my haiku completley

They actually were very lovely haiku's. But the game is as I described in post above. I like the way you write. Stay in - it is so much fun!

stay in - it is fun!! I just wrote you a message and it did not post...wait I will rewrite it.

It just posted - sorry....just slow I suppose....

If I'm tracking this right I think I'm following Janine:

A statue made white
With the gentle falling ash
Pompeii life now stilled.

Lovley P, as always. I particularly like this one though.

Pompeii life now stilled
Ashen walls and earthly time
still as gentle rain

Still as gentle rain
they await the dawn of fear
army passing by

PS: P - I was referring to your poem and not mine last time...sounded confusing...last sentence.

Thanks Janine (I got it ;)). I like yours too.

Army passing by
Beautiful young men passing
Away far from home.

Away, far from home
Is where his two feet takes him.
Don't know where to go.

Don't know where to go
Now that I have gone this far
Endless possibilities

Endless possibilities
Endless musical passion
Endless dreams and hopes

Hey Shougrace, I'm being a good girl...

Endless dreams and hopes
Thwarted now in memory
Trapped beyond time alone

Endless dreams and hopes
Aspirations of fooled youth
Crushed with middle age

Uh, whom shall I follow?

haha, my mom read my last one and said, with a very grim face, "was i the inspiration?"