did I spell knawing wrong?
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did I spell knawing wrong?
knawling? ....whoops! :blush:
gnawing. cool haiku, Janine!
fast fury begins
Christmas comes but once a year,
Consumerism.
haha, love your take on that one riesa!oh and i just discovered your cinquain thread and am having lots of fun with that.
Consumerism
Mosaic of screens pressure
Poor mans addiction
Poor man's addiction
is a snowy football game.
Touchdown is needed.
I love Riesa's haiku - just the way I am feeling right now...like Christmas....help! Consumerism, like a lurking wolf, invades all the stores!!! Thanks - did you really like my haiku? I did not think it made sense. I just changed the word "gnawing" - is that fair to do in the rules?
dramasnot6 I loved yours, too! Just got back from a store, so I can relate. The mosiac gave me a headache! Virgil - yours was so guyish. Is that a word?.... but I liked it. Not sure I can touch that last line but will try one anyway.
Touchdown is needed
All tension is magnified
Snowflakes on the hide
Yes, I liked it. Why would I say so if I didn't. I think you've got the hang of it now.
Snowflakes on the hide
Snout sinks into the snowbank.
Puppies love fresh snow.
Puppies love fresh snow.
Where has my little dog gone?
Into a white drift.
dogs are amazing
I love all of them always
golden retriever!
The wind I believe
is blowing towards the sea
from here away home
hm...last line doesn't quite make sense
Imagination
is my life blood and my soul
Oh, if i was free
Virgil - your haiku was so cute....then P followed with a sweet one, too. I went ....ahhh....
Virgil - no silly wolf, I was speaking to Riesa. I loved her "consumerism" Haiku. She like my haiku, she said.
Yes, I am having fun now and think I have the swing of it.
Into a white drift
The silver dove slowly swooned
A statue make white
Ops, someone broke the chain? I am still on "Into a white drift". We must have posted same time. What now?
I think i'm not too shabby at this "haiku"
please tell if i'm doing them wrong =D
one last poem...
To sleep i must fall
Mom's shrieks do affirm my thought
I bid you adieu
ok, there is no way i spelled adiue right =P
brainstorm, you did what I did in the beginning. You have to pick up the last line from last Haiku to start the new one you write. I just got the gist of it, too.