Well, just guess it out! I thought you are a 'physiognomist', arn't you??:)Quote:
Originally Posted by Janine
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Well, just guess it out! I thought you are a 'physiognomist', arn't you??:)Quote:
Originally Posted by Janine
Hi Lynne, talk about confusion...read the last 5 or so.....I will use your line....your Haiku is a good one!
Oh, so much to learn
then this is the place to be
learn to write haiku!
Oh, so much to learn!
It's cruel for tender age
to burden its mind.
:lol:...still must look that up online.....hummm.....:confused:Quote:
Originally Posted by mazHur
hate to tear myself away, but I have to go and make dinner now....be back later, no doubt....
learn to write haiku
five seven five syllables
spread out in three lines
Where are you located and what time is it there??Quote:
Originally Posted by Janine
It's 3.30am here and time to kick the sack.
US East Coast; 6:05PM; for me it's dinnertime....wish I was going out to eat....not too keen on my own cooking these days...goodnight, maz!...Haiku's were fun....:)Quote:
Originally Posted by mazHur
spread out in three lines
to finish your fine Haiku
enjoyed reading them!
enjoyed reading them
those crazy haikus of yours
your syllabic skill
enjoyed reading them
the subtleties of your thoughts
filled with affection.
Jan,,,have a nice evening! It really was a pleasure to read your haikus and exchange words G'Night!
filled with affection
like a basin brimming with
a rainfall of tears
a rainfall of tears
windmill wishes carry on
love will come what M(m)ay.
same here and dinner did not turn out half bad tonight. Love your newest Haiku....sweet...Quote:
Originally Posted by mazHur
Let me do both of the last ones posted:
your syllabic skill
that enlightens my viewpoint
look outside the box!
filled with affection
my thoughts fly out to your world
left behind alone
look outside the box!
people say, but can you look......
out of the circle????
out of the circle...
life, rudely interrupted
love, cruelly cut short
love, cruelly cut short
jealousy invades the my world
eyes burn me with hate
Eyes burn me with hate
But understanding wins out
And love conquers all
and love conquers all
In the end, hold fast, receive
love will reward you
Love will reward you
raindrop kisses on the neck
such a nice surprise
Such a nice surprise
I expected nothing less
You were right on time.
You were right on time
our hearts never miss a beat
takes two to tango
takes two to tango
the band is a distraction
we're music enough
We're music enough
in this house alone and dead
but not yet rotting
but not yet rotting
still the stench of lost desire
is past forgetting
is past forgetting
necessary for rebirth
or hiding from crimes
or hiding from crimes
will not save you from the long
creeping hands of law
creeping hands of law
steel fingers serve and protect
don't fear the tin man.
don't fear the tin man
he is like a barking dog
who'd seldom bite!
Who'd seldom bite
like the one that got away
fishing compliments.
fishing compliments
suffice not for a hungry
man when he needs fish!
man when he needs fish
too often opens a can
fresh for me please!
fresh for me please
the canned fish is too briny
I have a sweet tooth.
I have a sweet tooth
sugar lips, peppermint eyes
drink's on me sweetheart.
drink's on me sweetheart
parasoled sex on the beach
just kiss me later
just kiss me later
now there's no one watching us
much more can happen
much more can happen
when the opportunity
is at its most ripe
Is at its most ripe
the best time for plucking it
while in Nantucket?
While in Nantucket?
I saw the water not blue.
It was azure green.
It was azure green.
Now misty red. And Swelling.
Eyes are so telling.
eyes are so telling
speak their universal tongue
see the world anew