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oh im so sorry toni, didnt know u posted one for musical color already....

Midnight sun is up
Movements clandestine and trapped
Hail to demons will

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Originally Posted by dramasnot6

oh im so sorry toni, didnt know u posted one for musical color already....

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It is oki, dramasnot:lol: :lol: ;) :p :D :) (I love emoticons)

Hail to demons will
The sky will tumble at Fall
Stings of human sin..

Stings of human sin
Vodka embeds every sound
Blonde hair pokes through sheets

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Originally Posted by ShoutGrace

Well, what should we do about it? Maybe we should take a poll! Have people vote as to whether or not my haiku is valid - see if there is anybody out there who would be willing to try to use it, assuming that it can be pronounced with just one syllable?

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Frankly I think the author has descretion on how he wants to pronounce it. I like the flexibility.

Blonde hair pokes through sheets
After a night of rolling fun.
My first and only love.

aww that last line was touching virgil

My first and only love
She melts into my fingers
Luscious chocolate

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Originally Posted by dramasnot6

why did u ignore my haiku?

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No Dramasnot, I didn't. You probably posted already while I was still typing. I don't ignore anyone, it makes them feel bad. And when someone feels bad, I blame myself. :(

ah i understand.its ok, dont blame yourself. blame technology:p

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Originally Posted by dramasnot6

aww that last line was touching virgil

My first and only love
She melts into my fingers
Luscious chocolate

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Thanks!

Luscious chocolate
made my hips explode wide
and my belly hang

lol

And my belly hang
Endless rolls fight gravity
Pillsbury Doughboy

Pillsbury Doughboy
Is what the guys call me now.
Poke a finger in.

Poke a finger in,
explore sensuality
but linger no more.

But linger no more
Flee to the woods if you wish
Before the night falls

Welcome to the forum, Il Penseroso!:wave:
Hope you have a great time! :lol:

Thanks toni! I'm sure I will.

Before the night falls,
shadows caress your lids,
mind the calming dusk.