in dark city streets
there is no fear of tigress
devouring my heart.
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in dark city streets
there is no fear of tigress
devouring my heart.
In dark city streets,
unknown crime was committed.
Perception is key!
Perception is key
try it in the Sunder Buns
and you are no more!
and you are no more
one with the sun in hand, your
stars have fallen far
stars have fallen far
but the twinkle remains there
to make you ev'r smile !
to make you ev'r smile,
the city blazes out in
red manhattan lights
Red Manhattan lights
marks a certain district here...
don't stand by waiting!
try to write haiku
-get bored-
try again
dont stand by waiting
for the moon, it comes, and you
havent ever dreamed
hello jikan :D :wave:
please note that the haiku is a little (3-liner) poem syllabled 5-7-5. :) the instructions are in the first page of this thread. so here on! try to write a haiku, get bored, and try again may be? :) :thumbs_up
haven't ever dreamed?
Come in for a dream come true...
Just, $9.95!
Just, $9.95
is not much for a peep show
40 second street!
(finish?)
sorry, had got mixed up again and thought it was 3 ppl haiku!
40 second street
where my house was located
till the bulldozer
glass shards of ocean
the animals are shattered
in the broken wave
ShardsOfOcene, this is 'Shared Haiku', so you simply use the last line from last poster as your first line and then you write the rest. I like you Haiku though. I would keep that for another time. Welcome to the forum. I see you are new. I love your user name - very clever.
You may want to try again with the line from last Haiku:
till the bulldozer
thanks, do i just restart? I'll do that. :)
till the bulldozer
I liked the view on the plain
now it's dirt and dust
now it's dirt and dust
the cat I had, died last year
it decayed, so sad :bawling:
this is fun :D
it decayed, so sad
nature could use it to grow
it can be helpful
it can be helpful
if you would cooperate
so please just comply
so please just comply
wow, you said it; be tactfull
discussion's complex
discussions complex
but to the "intelligent"
simple -- to simple
simple -- to simple
look to ones' simple beliefs
simple solutions
simple solutions
are very hard to come by
things aren't black and white
things aren't black and white
gray shroud dominates the air
obscured sun at dawn
obscure sun at dawn
like the head of red beauty
tempting my own soul
tempting my own soul
fruits of desire lay ready
lust for consumption
lust for consumption
the passion fruit in the bowl
wait to be eaten
Good one!
wait to be eaten
banana split with cherries
I love my ice-cream!
I love my ice-cream
two hundred fifty flavours
rainbows surely dance
please note that the haiku is a little (3-liner) poem syllabled 5-7-5. the instructions are in the first page of this thread. so here on! try to write a haiku, get bored, and try again may be?
comments by Symphony
reproduced!!
rainbows surely dance
for the benefit of babes
dreams support their play
dreams support their play
more heat is dissipated
cooler gets the soul
cooler gets the soul
dawn brushes sleep from her eyes
dew falls on my tongue
Hi mazHur!
Hi Qim
How are you doing?
dew falls on my tongue
like dry leaves falling in fall
unquenching my thirst
unquenching my thirst
mere mirage; desert daydreams
obscure my vision
obscure my vision
thick clouds of old memories
Ah! Left me my youth?
AH left me my youth
i am only but thirteen
the number is small
the number is small
but the fierce is greater still
band of brothers win
the number is small
but it will soon stretch up to
something very big!