that's 6 syl on the last line toni i think. i could b wrong
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that's 6 syl on the last line toni i think. i could b wrong
Not if it's like this:
Strugg'ling to break free
Woman chained to the stone bricks
Subject to his will. :brow:
No, it is 5.
Strug- 1
Ling- 2
To- 3
Break- 4
Free- 5
Hi there!
Struggling to break free
From the sad ghosts of my past
Flailing from a thread
Arrrr, Rob!
Merriam-Webster's confirms that "struggling" is but two syllables.
Unless you pronounce it as "stru-ggeh-ling". Haha.
Am I supposed to continue my own Haiku?
Allow me:
Flailing from a thread
Spider, poised between two hands
Subject to his will
Subject to his will
The spider sprouts silver wings
Now, its time to fly
Hey, rob, guess what, I already finished the Airbourne Honour!:)
Now, it's time to fly
Alarm's gone off, there's trouble!
The Warriors take flight
Thanks -- what'd you think?
The Warriors take flight
to the Zu mountains to fight
with their katanas
Two words, man-
Really Good.:)
Normally, the title alone has the power to make me allergic to the story, seeing that it is about planes and wars. But yours, man, it was different.. You've got a special power indeed. A writer by day and a vigilant superhero at night?
With their katanas
Blades glimmer in the crimson sun
They charge with vigour
They charge with vigor -
Running towards their lives so fast,
Then trip, crawl towards graves.
Um, is the word "towards" just composed of 1 syllable, like "tords"? Because if it's not, I'm afraid the last line has 6 syllables.
Hi ShoutGrace!
Well, hello Laindessiel. How do you say 'towards'? One thing you did forget to mention - if 'towards' is more than one syllable, then my second line is invalid as well, and deserving similar criticism. ;)
Like "TOH-wards".