The finish line looms--
Don't yell at me, I know where
I'm going... I think
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The finish line looms--
Don't yell at me, I know where
I'm going... I think
Oh I am truly sorry, Dramasnot!!!! :( :(Quote:
Originally Posted by dramasnot6
I don't know what's gotten into me at that time but I seriously counted it to have 7 syllables!! I admit I messed up. Oh, geez, man, I am so sorry...
Don't worry, I DO know how to speak. :thumbs_up
And yes, please take pride in your Haiku abilities. It is highly laudable. :)
Peace?
I'm going...I think
Where gods and beasts live and die...
"Die", such a long word....
oh im sorry i got all evil there....i just re-read my post and it was very irrational. very sorry...but my poems are like my children, as sad as that is. but thank you sincerely. mucho peace.
"Die", such a long word....
Brief upon lips, yet in hearts
Infinity reins
Infinity reigns,
Completely overwhelming
Smaller niceties.
Smaller niceties:
Hungry for bigger favors
Not enough, Love says
Not enough, Love says,
propping open the closing
doors of indifference.
doors of indifference
like trees clap color's last call,
winter closes them
Winter closes them
Knitting memories of past
Crawling one by one
Crawling one by one
We inch toward the guillotine
Eager for the end.
Eager for the end
To see the new horizon
Lying in a haze
Lying in a haze
Of sated lust and faded
Thoughts of what we were.
Thoughts of what we were
Whirling in a dark malice
Veiled with lies, deceit.
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That's sad!
Yes it is. ;)
Veiled with lies, deceit -
Our selfish, brilliant dance,
Preserved by our fear.
Preserved by our fear
I smell your sins and blunders
Please do, set me free
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Now that was really sad!
Please do, set me free
This was not part of the deal
Mascara eyes run