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what's the haiku format again?????

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Originally Posted by ;7807

Ok, so, I write a haiku, then the next poster uses the last line of myhaiku... k? ;)

Haiku:
1. A Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

2. A poem written in this form.


what will you become
anything you want to be
Truth in time will tell

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Hope its clear now....

Metamorphosis,I dont understand.
In these realms of Voracious Desires,
A Gregor Samsa asks another...

((What happened to 5-7-5?))

A Gregor Samsa
Is a kind of beverage
A taste of apple

A taste of apple
reminds me of my two front
teeth...oh agony!

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Originally Posted by ktd222

A taste of apple
reminds me of my two front
teeth...oh agony!

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i like i like i like!
(ok so it's not a haiku... but had to comment)

an apple a day
is great; but a pineapple
rots my teeth away!

Mo, the first line of your haiku has to lead off with the last line of the previous poster's haiku.

rots my teeth away
sunsets sweet smile opens eye
eternal compost

eternal compost
decomposing, nourishing.
the circle of life

the circle of life
sometimes doesn't reach its tail.
Then the sun goes dark.

then the sun goes dark
as the last humans watch through
embedded eye-pods.

have fun with that one, next person. :D

Embedded eye-pods
Floating about in blue slime
Very odd Sci-fi.

very odd sci-fi
is what he likes most of all
he is a strange man

he is a strange man.
but i think daily of him,
awake from heartache...