w00t emily, congrats! :p
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w00t emily, congrats! :p
Is this the real haiku? Just use the last line of the previous section? whatever, it's interesting. Keep the game going.
Let me try,never tried this before.Quote:
Originally posted by atiguhya padma
light, constant, routine
and yet your respiration
reasons my breathing
Reason my breathing
The daylight brings a new routine
My fair baby crying
Ava, there are different forms of haiku however this one I chose was as a 5-7-5 syllabic pattern. The one you wrote is 5-8-6... but great first attempt so glad you joined it! :D I look forward to more.
Reasons my breathing
Rhythm changes so, are all
Embodied in you
Embodied in you
My soul linking with your heart,
Shatter me and die
Shatter me and die,
Lock me up and never live
Give me, receive me.
Give me, recieve me
Take me by the hand and swear
Violence solves nothing
violence solves nothing
teaches children death and hate
and we ask how? why?
and we ask how? why?
no answers exist in this
meaningless cosmos
meaningless cosmos
we spin round out of control
into the sun now
Into the sun now
the highway lies empty, clear
green trees left and right
Green trees left and right
Moonlight-coated peeling skin
Grass dew-fresh to touch
Grass dew-fresh to touch
Your palms press down perfect blades
Swords to your soft flesh.
Swords to your soft flesh
my nails catch your arm as you
turn away from me