what is natural
artificial is from us
cant eat and have too
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what is natural
artificial is from us
cant eat and have too
Welcome scaredoldunit....I THINK this thread is about taking the last line of the haiku before you, and then continuing with your own. So, I'm gonna do two, one for haven's and one for yours.
brittle blue-white worldQuote:
Originally Posted by Haven
when you pushed me in the snow
and then slammed the door
can't eat and have tooQuote:
Originally Posted by scaredoldunit
your cake and kisses
at least at same time
Welcome scaredoldunit and nice haikus.
One note: the idea here is to complete the previous poet's last line. That is, take the last haiku's last line and add a second and third line.
can't eat and have too
bad taste in your mouth at worst
drooled advance at best
at least at same time
pose two related questions
save a paradigm
save a paradigm
and a molecule or two
you are my hero
you are my hero
go and get the enemy
just don't keep scowling!
just don't keep scowling
when asked to take out garbage
remember your vows
[oh I HAD to write that one ... a tease to all those husbands out there who feel abused] ;)
remember your vows
you said stolen kisses were
the sweetest but now?
The sweetest but now?
Do my murmurs draw goosebumps?
Or have you let go?
Or have you let go?
do you think you are okay?
smile, this is spring time!
smile, this is springtime
and your kisses sublime, my
dreamy valentine
Dreamy valentine
my hand is comfortable
in the warmth of yours
in the warmth of yours
coddled creature that I am
I crave your niches
I crave your niches
desire your nooks and crannies
I fill them with love
I fill them with love,
sweet and golden as the sun,
tasty marmalade
tasty marmalade,
red leaves in the sill- early
october ochers
October ochers
melt into whites of Winter
icing on the trees
icing on the trees
finished order of ripe frost
spent in clipped exchange
spent in clipped exchange
weary of verbal abuse
talk to me, please, now
spent in clipped exchange,
saw collateral damage,
Big Bang at short range!
hey, you caught speed !:)Quote:
Originally Posted by ampoule
talk to me, please, now
repeat the same old words,dear,
say that you love me!:)
say that you love me.
that you practically adore
the ground I walk on
The ground I walk on
crackles gaily as I walk -
pieces of Autumn
pieces of autumn
appear here and there on the
ferris wheel of life
ferris wheel of life
spinning off its worn axis
into rent ethos
into rent ethos
I gaze upon the big bang's
gaudy aftermath
gaudy aftermath
so much blown to smithereens
collect my pieces
collect my pieces
put them together again -
better than before.
better than before:
I, slothlike student, wave my
triumphant knowledge
triumphant knowledge,
the answers and the questions,
a tightly wound rope
a tightly wound rope,
around my neck wrapping together
the pieces of my lost life
pieces of my lost life
rubble on the station floor
footprints obscuring
footprints obscuring
my lowly walk without you
your handprint still burns
your handprint still burns
But halt love inclinations
Self-serving. Forward
Self serving, forward.
Am I describing me, you?
I don't know. Kiss me.
I don't know. Kiss me.
Just do what comes natural.
Don't overthink this.
Don't overthink this
Just let yourself spill out--
You'll find that it works.
You'll find that it works
don't judge it by off cycling
do it some oiling
Do it some oiling
this rusty misspent lifetime
and ride the North winds
And ride in the North Winds
See the aurora shimmer
Around your body.