Cloud spews violet rain
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Cloud spews violet rain
Cloud spews violet rain
Sun gathers the aftermath
Cloud spews violet rain
Sun gathers the aftermath
stashes in clouds' humps
stashes in cloud's humps
mosques loom over desert sands
stashes in cloud's humps
mosques loom over desert sands
crying God is Great!
crying God is Great
armoured knights, their crosses raised
Hey!Quote:
Originally Posted by Janine
how come you switched over to sombre prose?;)
Oh, sorry! I forgot this was not haiku but 3 people haiku!!
here's the 3rd line!!
thinking what to do?
I guess I feel sombre today. Also, I just saw a film with knights returning from the holy lands. Power of suggestion is great! :lol:Quote:
Originally Posted by mazHur
After I posted this you posted - is that your last line for the Haiku? I am totally confused now. You better start the next first line.
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Originally Posted by Janine
pretty religious thou seem to be
I'm not sure but I can guess
there shines a star in the sky
it's far away but looks nigh!;)
crying God is Great
armoured knights, their crosses raised
thinking what to do?
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Originally Posted by mazHur
What's this? A four line haiku, mazHur? :lol:
New one starts:
Fallen far behind
Fallen far behind
the runner trips over dawn
Fallen far behind
the runner trips over dawn
the day has lapped him
Great! :)
I'm soaked to the skin
I'm soaked to the skin
my thin bones are drowned within
I'm soaked to the skin
my thin bones are drowned within
shivering with cold
The unfair morning
The unfair morning
started before I got up
The unfair morning
started before I got up
sun streams hells vapours
The lonely chipmunk peeked...
the lonely chipmunk peeked
with the most mischevious eyes
the lonely chipmunk peeked
with the most mischevious eyes
spying on the cats
Evil Siamese...
Evil Siamese
stealers of mittens
Evil Siamese
stealers of mittens
feline innocence
Fie on you, Frodo!
Fie on you, Frodo!
Golum lusts for the shiny ring
Fie on you, Frodo!
Golum lusts for the shiny ring
Precious they want...NO!
Craggy rocks whispered
Craggy rocks whispered
The light voice intensified
Craggy rocks whispered
The light voice intensified
until the dream waned
rich merchant of dreams
rich merchant of dreams
trades in futures and desires
rich merchant of dreams
trades in futures and desires
a stranger to now
Steel structures sprout up...
Steel structures sprout up
thrusting javelins in earth's heart
Steel structures sprout up
thrusting javelins in earth's heart
Mother Nature bleeds
hold this in your hand
hold this in your hand
'It's not a small bomb is it?'
hold this in your hand
'It's not a small bomb is it?'
Whew! ...a bit of hope...