New Poetry Game-Cinquain Chain- Come on, it's easy and fun!

It rhymed.
It had that much.
The meter wasn’t bad.
We’re still alive with time to touch
the heart.

the heart
weighs the same as
a can of Mountain Dew
but in the end, the downed Dew wins
code blue

code blue
means I love you
and if you don't love me
go away and let me be free
agree

(huh!! :confused5: I hope the syllable problem is set now)

Looks good, Free! :)

I thought I posted this before but I guess it's out in space somewhere. Anyway, Melanie's is better.

The heart
Is a drummer,
A player, a mummer
Whose dumbshow runs only a day.
Bummer.
***

Agree
With all I say!
It's what they said to me
So it must be okay--wouldn't
They say?

They say
what I thought they
would say: some pleasant stuff
In time today to let it flow
away.

Away:
Past or to come,
Whether future or gone,
Are fated in distance from us
To stay.

To stay
and spend the night
with a full moon for light
would have been nice were we not made
of ice.

Of ice,
While it has charms,
Goosebumps rising on arms
Often rise my ire. So I go
With fire.

With fire
I conquered ice
though briefly on the lake
frozen, waveless, heartless with fish
to take.

To take
Your meaning, sir,
I find I must concur.
Yes, it is as you say. Now go
Away!

“Go away!”
She wanted rest,
but for how long he would
not know. Then walls grew. Then he could
not go.

Not go?
Mais non, mais non!
One goes unto the fray:
The road cannot end and we can-
Not stay.

Not stay?
No way. I’d be
here any day the sun
would rise to entertain our soft
blue skies.

Blue skies,
An illusion,
One finds: light blossoms for a time,
Then bent to our minds, it colors
Our eyes.

Our eyes
see what they will
and give our minds their fill
of mystery, half certainty
and thrill.