damnation again. nevermind me :p
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damnation again. nevermind me :p
Felled by biting axe
My ghost vows never again
To eat of that blade
To eat of that blade,
I chase after you blindly,
Speared through by your eyes.
Speared through by your eyes
His heart bled love , then lust
Fire begets fire.
Fire begets fire
In the humours of the heart
Melancholy mind
Melancholy mind
On a dreary winter's day
Like hibernation
like hibernation
mind gently avoids care
thoughts escape neglect
Verybaddmom,
Nice haiku. I liked it. You did need an extra syllable in the middle line though.
thoughts escape neglect
by merging into concepts
waking memories
oops...that'll learn me :o
waking memories
disturbing thoughts persisting
through my concious mind
i counted and double counted....does that work better?
:D
Yeah that works better. Looks like you're getting the hang of this:)
through my conscious mind
precious thoughts of your kind words
find pathways to love
Find pathways to love
Wading through the shallow depths
Of loves divine image
Thanks *^_^*
¬_¬;; I thought this was gonna suck, but it's great *^_^*
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Of love's divine image
comes an image never felt
save me from the guilt
save me from the guilt
my Jewish heritage wins
can we flee the past?
can we flee the past? -
relentless tornado in
merciless pursuit.
Merciless persuit
Ends in silver laughs of sun
Everyday morning