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From angelic girl to pole dancer. I guess every pole dancer was an angelic girl but not all angelic girls become pole dancers. I would dance for a handful of twenties and I was an angelic boy once ;)
Soundtrack wise, Massive Attack are Bristol's finest, so appreciated that too :)
Another very enjoyable trash day, lady haunted.
Probably highlighting one great nightmare for Dads with daughters! It's a horrifying thought, I promise you.
hey Dafy, I thought you weren't going to judge her :(
Jerry the angelic boy? ROFL. I definitely would give a 20 to see you dance.
Massive Attack is from Bristol?! What a small world!
thanks Daf and Jer for stopping in on trash day ;)
I'm dancing, I'm dancing
oooo...here's a 20 for the dance, another 20 for you to go get some clothes afterwards...
Hey Haunted, this one blows me away girlie... Yahoo...
thanks my darling :)
You my darling just keep producing such fine work... I melt everytime I read something new.
now that's going to make me want to write more, mwah for the encouragement, my darling girl.
Do i get 40 if I dance clothed from the start?
sorry that's not going to work, you have to work for every 20 you're going to get
You tell 'im, girlie...
working, working. Gyrating exposing for an extra 10 covering for an extra 20. I could be good at this..
You crack me up Jer... :thumbsup:Quote:
Originally Posted by Jerrybaldy
how about some undulations for variety, Jerry. Mary and I are cheering for you!
Undulating for all im worth here. My undulations are the best of all undulations. You have never seen undulations of the like. No man before or since has undulated like this. Cant stop , Im undulating.
don't they have indecency laws across the pond?
Clearly not... Jer is out of control...
oh no. we are the true land of the free. As long as you dont upset a minority, (majorities are fine) and as long as you dont smoke within a mile of a nonsmoker since your silly nonsmoking rules crossed the pond. Oh how I laughed some years ago at the report of a bar in california where smokers opened the windows and leant out to smoke. We will all live so long soon with our many methods that the world will smell badly of piss as we all wet ourselves in our lovely extended life's. :D
I'll have to bring over some Depends next time I cross the pond. For now keep undulating...
*comments welcome!*
new:
the little dancer
A Short Collection of Trashy Poems
Table of Contents
INTRODUCTION
D22 westbound
Victoria’s other secret
ghost fog
paper chase
love story
forcast
penitentiary
overnight snow
the little dancer
H, I promise you I'll read through them all, once I've got the nauseating picture of Jerry dancing out of my mind.......polished pate reflecting light off the pole, woolly socks with holes in, that egg-stained tie. Good grief, somebody give him some money to put his overcoat on!
LOL
I'll hold you to your promise, Dafy :)
Joe Reliable, that's me! (Ugh!)
Joe Reliable is good! I don't care for Uncle Unreliable....
I've been struggling with this poem. It started out in minimalist style but I felt I didn't get to say everything I wanted to say. It's autobiographical so I want to get this one right. Here's a rewrite of a rewrite http://www.online-literature.com/for...ad.php?t=55044 Please chime in and tell me what you think!!
his green eyes
they were never
this green
or this tranced
emeralds
as clear and dear
as his love
flawless
wholesome
then
why
he’s so distant
as though he didn’t see me
I searched inside
those unfamiliar
iridescent pupils
so undeniably
dilated
yet
here I am
so in denial
so
bro
ken
up
.
.
.
.
.
.
his vet
says
their
eyes
never
close
right
when
they
d
i
e
~for Apricot~
Oh Haunted. What a touching, lovely poem. I really felt for you, when I read it. Superb.
Oh, as a cat lover, I empathise with you, with this poem... You made me feel what you are feeling with the broken wording... Very clever effect
Thanks so much Dafy, your comment is heartfelt.
Mary, my cat lover friend, love you dear!
Haunted
I remember the original well and thought it was marvelous as it was. Nothing wrong with a bit of tinkering though, lost one.
haunted, this precious piece fills me with anguish... my cat is over 15... but - your poem is a masterpiece in form and an infinity at heart!Quote:
Originally Posted by Haunted
Thank you.
Bar
aww Bar, your comment touched me. Wish you all the best with your kitty, dear.
Jerry, you have such good memory, thanks for giving both of them a read!
just updating the TOC...removing an unpostworthy poem from the list....
please comment, criticize, rant away, etc. If you feel the need to trash a trashy poem, go ahead, I can take the abuse :D
A Short Collection of Trashy Poems
Table of Contents
INTRODUCTION
D22 westbound
Victoria’s other secret
ghost fog
paper chase
love story
forcast
penitentiary
overnight snow
the little dancer
his green eyes
September 2nd
another
month
another
anniversary
today i will be
with my baby
he
died
seven months ago
on the 2nd
please
don’t look
for me
today
Haunted, you have this amazing ability to turn even the most hardened cynic to tears. I'm pretty sure than most of us would just like to give you a big hug, and try to make you feel better. Much love
Dave
This must be about green eyes...
love to you haunted,
Jerry
awww Dave, you're such a sweetheart <3
Jerry knows, this is indeed about green eyes...thanks my dear x
I just feel for zou. I know the pain of loss of a loved pet.
It's lovely though it is so sad, and it reminds us that life is so fragile and so valuable. It's a really good poem because it is a perfect expression of the feeling. And it's so sweet to make a day for remembering him.
Thanks Nik. I know you would be one to agree that connectedness doesn't end with death.
yes Daf, 2 and counting...