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c'mon... i really need help... now is the time i start to regret...
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Originally Posted by yellowfeverlime
What is the topic of your essay? You need to develop your thesis in the first sentence, is it about Josef Stalin, or about symbolism in 1984. I think you should address this in the first paragraph, and then expound on your reasoning.
Napoleon symbolises (represents, inferrs...) as opposed to "plays". Were the other animals slaves? subjugates? or sbmissives?
Your sentence referring to Stalin's birth date is a fragment. You can remove the comma and add 'was' or remove "." and write into following sentence about parent i.e. Josef Stalin, born xxxx, grew up in a poor family of freed serfs. You can reduce your wordiness and excessive info.
Maybe I'll see some more in a while
Regret what?
..."Also, as in the book, Animal Farm, Napoleon deceives his slaves by telling them things that things that were true were lies. " This part sounds really awkward
"Josef (Joseph) Stalin played a very important role in the Russian Revolution. Joseph Stalin, born on December 18, 2005."
"Joseph Stalin was made fun of as a kid. He was given a tough edge as a child, because he had come in contact with the disease, smallpox, and was made fun of for the scars that were shown on his face for the rest of his childhood" repeating yourself
"Joseph Stalin had been" You didn't finish that thought
...I'm pointing out noticeable mistakes for now
I also suggest less posting, it will eat into your time, and distract you from your efforts. No offense.
Thanks. I will finish
Due tom.... in 4th period
Please cont... helping. I hate asking for help.... grrrr......
Would it be plagairism if you put a website you got a "Free Essay" from in your bibliography????
It would be plagiarism if you use portions of the essay without noting. Saying something someone else wrote is your original writing. Its often very easy to spot, because of wording, vocabulary, and concise phrasing that would not be found in other parts of the writing.
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Sorry, I had to help my dad with something. Let's go back to the project...
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I am trying to find Stalin's strength's and weaknesses, but i can't find anything, not even on google. And answer my question:
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Would it be plagairism if you put a website you got a "Free Essay" from in your bibliography????
Ok, i need to go to bed soon!!!!!!!!!! Why???? LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Josef (Joseph) Stalin played a very important role in the Russian Revolution. Josef Stalin, born on December 18, 2005, was born into a family consisting of three dead brothers, his mother, a laundry woman, Ekaterina Geladze (Wikipedia), and his father, Vissarion Jughashvili, who was a cobbler. Josef grew up in a poor home, and was in a family of freed serfs and was neglected as a child by his father, who was possibly a drunk, adding to his anger in life. Josef Stalin was made fun of as a kid. He was given a tough edge as a child, because he had come in contact with the disease, smallpox, and was made fun of because the scars from the disease remained on his face, visibly, for the rest of his life. Josef Stalin was later accepted into a school called Tiflis Theological Seminary, where he eventually was expelled for a few reasons, and possibly even for reading a banned book. Although a large chunk of his life in jail and prison, he still managed to manage a Socialist Revolution.
Josef Stalin had acquired Socialist views at a young age. Socialism is a political system of communal (shared: used or owned by all members of a group or community) ownership: a political theory or system in which the means of production and distribution are controlled by the people and operated according to equity (fairness: actions, treatment of others, or a general condition characterized by justice, fairness, and impartiality) and fairness rather than market principles, and it also is a movement based on socialism: any of several political movements or theories of the 19th and 20th centuries based on principles of socialism, typically advocating an end to private property and the exploitation of workers, or stage between capitalism and communism: in Marxist theory, the stage after the proletarian (relating to the working class) revolution when a society is changing from capitalism to communism, marked by pay distributed according to work done rather than need (Definitions from-Microsoft Works Dictionary V. 2005). These are the beliefs of Josef Stalin. Josef Stalin was in jail half of the time.
Animal farm, a book written in the 1940’s ny George Orwell, is a satirist tale that has a hidden meaning, which is that the story is actually telling the story of the Russian Revolution. In this book, the character, or rather, the animal, that plays the role of Josef Stalin is Napoleon, one of the main, and most evil character of the book. Napoleon, like Josef Stalin, is not a good speaker. Josef Stalin, rather than being the brains himself, took ideas from other people. Also, as in the book, Animal Farm, Napoleon deceives his slaves by telling them things that things that were true were lies. This is another example of how Orwell illustrates the
Josef Stalin had many strengths and weaknesses. Some of them tha made b=him, and some if them that broke them. Some of his weaknesses are that he was not really good at speeches… Some of Josef Stalin’s strengths were that he
talk about cramming....
As B-Mental said: it would be if you put part of the essay w/o saying where you found the info.... if you put it in your biblio I think that it might not be considered pla.
Hold on, I'll try to find info about it.
BTW: Calm Down!!!! Getting panicked about it won't help (trust me on this ;)
I didn't even notice that post... o well. let's get onw/ the project, while my friend laughs in the back ground...
Don't ask, lol
I hate seeming like i am sooo stupid.... o well, at this moment i am..
This might help:
http://www.johndclare.net/Russ1.htm
Sorry, but where can i find the strengths and weaknesses of JOSEF STALIN himself?
OK, I FAILED............................................ ..... I am going to have to go to bed.....
" born on December 18, 2005, was born into a family consisting of three dead brothers, his mother, a laundry woman, Ekaterina Geladze" Too many born's try 'raised'
"Seminary, where he eventually was expelled for a few reasons" What do you mean by 'a few reasons'
"he still managed to manage a Socialist Revolution" too many manage's try 'direct or administer'
- better except for the last part....I'll try to find his s & w
thanks
well, i don't want to plagarize, so i don't want to go into great detail on that part. It was:
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Talking back to a person at a higher position than him
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supposedly he was forming some sort of Socialist group
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and also for reading banned or unallowed books
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What do you mean???Quote:
Originally Posted by yellowfeverlime
I failed that class, there were parent teacher conferences tonite. My parents are pi**ed
All my homework was late, and for a class i am not good at, the teacher is really good!
:crash: :smash: :yawnb: :rage: Back to the project...
More reason for you to finish this essay and get a good grade on it, right :D.... no pressure. What do you have so far (I'm still looking for his s&w)
Where could i incorporate this into the essay (BTW: I really appreciate this. I would give you a hundred dollars, but i don't have ne money)
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Marxism-The economic and political theories of Karl Marx and Friedrich Engels that hold that human actions and institutions are economically determined and that class struggle is needed to create historical change and that capitalism will ultimately be superseded by communism
I have been looking for s&w, and haven't made much progrees, i have much more time to do this since i got a lecture from my dad a sec... ago... they're so :yawnb:
Animal Farm & The Russian Revolution World History Honors Stephen White
Josef (Joseph) Stalin played a very important role in the Russian Revolution. Josef Stalin, born on December 18, 2005, was born into a family consisting of three dead brothers, his mother, a laundry woman, Ekaterina Geladze (Wikipedia), and his father, Vissarion Jughashvili, who was a cobbler. Josef grew up in a poor home, and was in a family of freed serfs and was neglected as a child by his father, who was possibly a drunk, adding to his anger in life. Josef Stalin was made fun of as a kid. He was given a tough edge as a child, because he had come in contact with the disease, smallpox, and was made fun of because the scars from the disease remained on his face, visibly, for the rest of his life. Josef Stalin was later accepted into a school called Tiflis Theological Seminary, where he eventually was expelled for a few reasons, and possibly even for reading a banned book. Although a large chunk of his life in jail and prison, he still managed to lead a Socialist Revolution.
Josef Stalin had acquired Socialist views at a young age. Socialism is a political system of communal (shared: used or owned by all members of a group or community) ownership: a political theory or system in which the means of production and distribution are controlled by the people and operated according to equity (fairness: actions, treatment of others, or a general condition characterized by justice, fairness, and impartiality) and fairness rather than market principles, and it also is a movement based on socialism: any of several political movements or theories of the 19th and 20th centuries based on principles of socialism, typically advocating an end to private property and the exploitation of workers, or stage between capitalism and communism: in Marxist theory, the stage after the proletarian (relating to the working class) revolution when a society is changing from capitalism to communism, marked by pay distributed according to work done rather than need (Definitions from-Microsoft Works Dictionary V. 2005). These are the beliefs of Josef Stalin. Josef Stalin was in jail half of the time.
Animal farm, a book written in the 1940’s ny George Orwell, is a satirist tale that has a hidden meaning, which is that the story is actually telling the story of the Russian Revolution. In this book, the character, or rather, the animal, that plays the role of Josef Stalin is Napoleon, one of the main, and most evil character of the book. Napoleon, like Josef Stalin, is not a good speaker. Josef Stalin, rather than being the brains himself, took ideas from other people. Also, as in the book, Animal Farm, Napoleon deceives his slaves by telling them things that things that were true were lies. This is another example of how Orwell illustrates the
Josef Stalin had many strengths and weaknesses. Some of them that made him, and some if them that broke them. Some of his weaknesses are that he was not really good at speeches… Some of Josef Stalin’s strengths were that he
The economic and political theories of Karl Marx and Friedrich Engels that hold that human actions and institutions are economically determined and that class struggle is needed to create historical change and that capitalism will ultimately be superseded by communism
The outcome of the Revolution was that Josef Stalin was killed, and the revolution was aborted….
Where to incorporate this....I don't know. Maybe when talking about what Stalin believed in and how it related to other philosophies that others, like Marx had invented(?)
hmmmmmmmmmm............................ let's see, how about when i randomly.... gotta change the song, this awful, BLOW Britney Spears
"Some of them that made him, and some if them that broke them." -> of
Still can't find anything on his s&w..........
LOL... I just put that cause my goal is to fil all of that in. Ans,. also, what is a referral??? It says i have to, and is it bad????
I've almost beat your posts. Post one more and you have 300!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A referral is when you refer someone to s/o else....I have no idea what they mena in this case (sorry)
Sorry Stevie,
Have to go (otherwise I am sooo dead). Sorry I couldn't be of more help :( Tell me all about it tomorrow 'kay. Bye