Animal Farm

I'm submitting this to my teaher lets see what mark will i get

I like the way you did this essay, I'm doing the book now for lit., and trying to do a project on it, this essay was a big help. Good on the Russian Revolution, I'm trying to do something on that, and I could use this. <br><br>~thirteen year old Eli

I read the essay and found it very interesting. I am currently doing animal farm in enlish, and this essay has helped me understand it.

Too much congratulations for a detailed essay but at the same time very boring. It is not so important the historichal background that is beyond the novel because the powerful general sense and message is another one. Orwell's most pupose is to give us the understanding of the traps that are inside political propaganda and political language. Politics sometimes attempt to cheat masses exploiting their ignorance. So the fundamental law "Four legs,two legs better" is without more difficulties changed into the similar but much different sentence:"Four legs good,two legs better". Thanks to the similarity in sound of the last words(bad-better) and above all thanks to the ignorance of the mass(or sheeps if you prefer)pigs ,walking on two legs like their previous rulers,have succeed to dominate and submite the sheeps. I think that this is a more interesting key of reading Animal Farm!

I am form the uk and i am currently in year nine i am aware that this is a ver had book to understand but i think your essay is really good i hope you dont mind but i printed it off and showed my english teacher and she liked it as well but she did point out the mistakes that have already been mentioned.

I totally agree with what you have written. I am reading Animal Farm at school and I feel it is extremely important to for our modern society. I think that democracy is the best out of dictatorship, socialism, and communism. Utopia (perfect society)is impossible because human nature just doesn't work that way. I think everyone likes power and has a different opinion on everything. After reading this book by George Orwell, I don't think I will ever think about Karl Marx the same way I did before. I think he just got his principles wrong. <br><br>

I am an English teacher from England. I teach students aged 13 - 18. Your essay and enthusiasm for English is excellent. I wish my students were half as talented as you! Please keep reading and imagining and learning!

I liked your essay even if it does have some mistakes. I have just started 9th grade and "Animal Farm" is our chosen book to, and your essay has helped a lotso thank you. (I promise I didn't just copy and paste it!).

<br>Sorry about this, but i dont see what everyone is praising you for. While most of your praise comes from much younger readers, it is understandable. I am afraid however, that if i tried to hand in an essay which miss's most of the relevent points that George Orwell was trying to make, i would be given a B- at best! It would of been a good essay done the night before if you were sleep depraved and running low on coffee..<br>Tofler

Hi Giavanna: I was browsing about Orwell and found your work. I had not read him at school but wanted to do it now thanks to the Internet. Your essay gave me a good idea of what the book is about.<br><br>Good Luck,<br>Carlos<br>Lima, Peru

hi i think this is a very good essay. i would like to use a few of your ideas for a vaguely similar essay that i need to do. i assure you i will not copy the whole essay and credit it as my own. thank you for understanding!!<br><br>anon

I read your essay as I am now also studying "Animal farm" for english, did this last year. Sure, there were some mistakes and it could have been improved, but I think overall you did a fantastic job! Two thumbs up! I'm also doing Revolutions next year, so this essay will definitely come in handy! If I end up writing an essay on "Animal Farm", I think I will also post it to see what people think. Thanks for the inspiration!

Your essay was the best I've seen for many years. Wonderful. Exquisite!

Pretty nice essay, the only thing i have to say is, what was the point? It looks as if you wrote a summary, but essays concentrate on one topic, such as the events in Russia that are parallel to the events in Animal Farm. And you forgot to write about Lenin. He is another Crucial member that is parallel to the plot and characters in Animal Farm.<br><br>9/10<br><br>Chris. Colorado Springs, Colorado.

I too had to read this book for my English class, and I also had to write a report on the representation of all the characters. Your essay provided insight that will help me with this paper. Thank You!