to my dear Maryd

:party: I'm dancing, anyone askin??

what Daf, a savage sheep? Jer quick, close the door behind you!! We don't want any interruptions.

:party: I also brought in a '48 band :nopity:

If you don't mind I'll sit this one out - it's the old war wound you know!! I'll just sit here with this bottle and wait........ Oh, by the way, the sheep's bleated its last.

Sad about the sheep. nevermind :D

Whats that I hear?? Glen, its you. I'm dancing. Bellboy, get me another screwdriver.

*Bellboy* Sorry, Sir, all we've got is this monkey wrench. We stole it from the monkey.

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Originally Posted by lallison

this is such
a great poem
who could imagine
that writing simple
sentimental sentences

broken with line breaks
and stanzas
could result in
a work of absolute genius
such as this

this is just as moving
as when I woke this morning
to my alarm clock beeping.

And I feel the same degree of appreciation
for you,
But I got to work anyhow.
Thanks for that.

This is as wonderful as
a greeting card
and just as original.

You have met our standards.
Congratulations!

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lmao - Your poem is as breathtaking as my kitchen wall (minus the grease stains which do in fact form interesting shapes if you stare at them long enough!)

:hurray: :rofl: :thumbs_up :p :cheers2:

Oh, we are having another lovely thread here, based on the most touching expression of deep fondness for each other. These sentiments are quite undefinable :hurray: :grouphug: :thumbsup: :cheers2:

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Originally Posted by Delta40

Quote:

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Originally Posted by lallison

this is such
a great poem
who could imagine
that writing simple
sentimental sentences

broken with line breaks
and stanzas
could result in
a work of absolute genius
such as this

this is just as moving
as when I woke this morning
to my alarm clock beeping.

And I feel the same degree of appreciation
for you,
But I got to work anyhow.
Thanks for that.

This is as wonderful as
a greeting card
and just as original.

You have met our standards.
Congratulations!

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lmao - Your poem is as breathtaking as my kitchen wall (minus the grease stains which do in fact form interesting shapes if you stare at them long enough!)

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Originally Posted by Jerrybaldy

Im sure your poem above will win you many admirers on here Lall.
I notice its untitled. May I suggest ' A lame wolf in sheep's clothing'?

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thanks for weighing in guys :)

but that's precisely why I call my poems trashy, now someone actually has the gumption to say it openly. BUt at least I didn't copy anyone's lines :p

Kudos to lallison.

He's not invited to our party. I'm now going to go and dance with ****. And I can't even dance. Yay!!

would have been fine had it been said openly

Darn it, I missed the party... I hate that I need to sleep... I mean why can't I be awake all the time...

And what's this I hear... Someone not happy about my ode to me by my special friend Haunted. In Haunted's words... Kudos to Lallison... :smash::smash::smash:

ah Mary. care for a dance. Im breakdancing on me own here

Jumps onto the floor and lands on her head...

Ouch....

steady on. 'Nurse, nurse' . Blood on the dance floor. picks up unconscious Mary and slow dances so nobody notices.